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Frozen Lakes

cloaked in winter white
silence reigns on frozen lakes ~
swans await spring's thaw



December 6, 2022
Winter Nature Themed Haiku Contest
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin

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Sam Kauffman

December 20, 2022 at 11:29 AM

Congratulations on your win Jenna. Your haiku creates such a sense of stillness and anticipation like Christmas Eve. I enjoyed the moment of serenity. Merry Christmas!

Andrea Dietrich

December 15, 2022 at 1:08 PM

so pretty!! Congrats on the win.

Linda Alice Fowler

December 15, 2022 at 8:29 AM

Nice picture you've painted with this one Jenna. Congratulations on your win! :)

Tania Kitchin

December 13, 2022 at 4:06 PM

Jenna, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku!

Line Gauthier

December 10, 2022 at 1:43 PM

beautiful and graceful ~

Linda Alice Fowler

December 7, 2022 at 7:18 AM

Vivid imagery Jenna. Nicely done! Best wishes for the contest. :) Linda

Jenna Logan

December 7, 2022 at 8:09 AM

I'm so happy you could picture the scene, Linda. Thank you.

Stephan McBride

December 6, 2022 at 2:00 PM

This last line cracked me up , I guess I can picture these swans out there waiting and wondering what has happened : ). I will be in raceland and gray LA tonight looking forward to the thawed lake : ) me and swans will be rejoicing

Stephan McBride

December 6, 2022 at 3:18 PM

Ok I will have to look up haiku to get understanding my mind is foolish : )

Jenna Logan

December 6, 2022 at 2:12 PM

To each his own I suppose but there was no humor intended in the third line of this Haiku.

L Milton Hankins

December 6, 2022 at 8:45 AM

A beautiful scene which I easily pictured as I read your haiku. I think Tania will like this.

Jenna Logan

December 6, 2022 at 8:51 AM

Morning, Milt. I had visions as to how I wanted to word this, but the syllable count wouldn't work with me until I wrote this. Thank you so very much.