L Milton Hankins Poet Triolet

Frozen In Time

Casting a glistening ray across glossy ice
Midnight sun above the frozen Arctic,
Shimmering stars adding a cosmic spice
Casting a glistening ray across glossy ice,
Two parka-clad lovers, a touch of nice,
Sharing soft, cooing love songs cathartic
Casting a glistening ray across glossy ice
Midnight sun above the frozen Arctic. 

Written November 15, 2022

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Caren Krutsinger November 17, 2022 at 12:56 PM There is a surreal magicalness about this one. L Milton Hankins November 17, 2022 at 1:52 PM I love the moonlight shimmering over the ice.

Joanna Daniel November 15, 2022 at 7:29 PM A lovely triolet, Milt:) L Milton Hankins November 15, 2022 at 7:30 PM Thank you so much for this sweet compliment, Jo.

Gershon Wolf November 15, 2022 at 6:45 PM Perfect moment - frozen in time. Huzzah! Superior poesy, methinks! :) gw L Milton Hankins November 15, 2022 at 6:51 PM Hey, gw, thanks! A compliment like that hangs around. Loved it.

Marco Chies November 15, 2022 at 5:11 PM Perfect. L Milton Hankins November 15, 2022 at 6:51 PM Thanks so much, Marco. I'm glad you liked it.

Sotto Poet November 15, 2022 at 3:32 PM Love your great metaphoric images in this wonderfully crafted Triolet. Great job. Thanks for your comment on my page. L Milton Hankins November 15, 2022 at 6:51 PM You're so welcome, Lasaad. Thanks to you for this lovely comment.

Tom Cunningham November 15, 2022 at 2:36 PM Love the imagery in this one Milton, a friend in Norway once went north to witness the midnight sun, she sent me a photo that looked liked 12 noon but it was midnight, hard to believe its possible. Tom L Milton Hankins November 15, 2022 at 6:52 PM Yes. I've never had the privilege of going to that part of the world, but those who have shared their experiences tell me it's incredible. Thanks for your comment, Tom.