Frozen In Time

Cleaning for a yard sale, it was that old envelope she found
The envelope worn and frail, but the ribbon around it still bound
A tear coming to her eye as she knew what was inside
And the memories she couldn't deny, as she sat there and cried

She began opening it, but then she stopped and just thought
In being unable to admit, there is no peace in what she had sought
She laid it on the bed, then went outside and began to pray
All those thoughts in her head, all those things she couldn't say

Her anguish and her pain, all cleansed from her heart,
What could she explain? It was no fault on her part,
It was he who had broken up, his very last letter,
She wished he had spoken up, she would have felt better,

Three years had gone by now, since his last correspondence
To God alone did she bow in her deepest darkest despondence
His words she knew by heart, but wished for a second chance
To forgive him and have a fresh start at God-given romance

Unraveling that bow, and one last time reading the card
It was time to let go, even though letting go would be so hard
Keeping her forgiveness as prime, her painful bitterness was gone
No more frozen in time, with God's gracious help, she moved on.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gauthier Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 10:12 PM
Well penned. The suspense was breathtaking. Congrats to you both on your collaboration and well deserved top win.
Flannery Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 4:00 AM
Thank you Line. I must say I had an excellent partner in this contest. God Bless.
Ligon Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 5:14 PM
So well written! Congrats to you both!
Flannery Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 3:59 AM
Thank you Juliet. I couldn't have done it without Jo Daniel. She is an excellent writer and added so much. Have a Blessed day.
Chiri Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 2:50 PM
Congrats to you both! Enjoyed this wonderful piece!;)
Flannery Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 2:57 PM
Thank you Brenda. Have a Blessed day.
One Avatar
November 14, 2019 at 2:09 PM
A lovely spiritual poem and a collaboration of great quality, especially as i cant tell it was written by two different people.. .thanks for taking part..
Flannery Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 4:01 AM
Thank you Silent One for this wonderful contest and allowing me to collaborate with such a great poet as Jo Daniel. I really enjoyed it. God Bless You.
Daniel Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 6:33 AM
It was a wonderful experience working with you, Vincent:) and I simply love the end result, hope Silent One does too:)
Flannery Avatar
November 11, 2019 at 12:56 PM
Thank you Jo Daniel, and the feeling is mutual.. I enjoyed doing this contest very much.
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