Frozen In Time-2

Frozen in time-2

I remember,
not so long ago
Sirocco winds,
would blow,
igniting our 
passions embers,
who could 
contemplate September.

Then the leaves 
changed their hue
as did your complexion
Hindsight, 
illuminates my mind 
with perfect 
20/20 reflection

My jokes 
lost their appeal
your smile 
was misplaced...
My love,
was still very real
yours disappeared 
without a trace.

Winter's chill 
came suddenly...
and with a vengeance...
you were gone 
without my name 
even being mentioned,
to your friends or mine,
your polar vortex 
left me
frozen in time.

An avalanche of emotions
pummeled me 
from all around
left me depressed, 
compressed,
concealed and
congealed, underground

I was caught off guard
paralyzed 
and plastered...
by this 
freakish storm
of an 
unnatural disaster

I imagine the day 
when sojourners 
trekking over barren tundra
they find me petrified, 
buried six feet under.

They spy a flower 
extended from what 
appears to be 
a mans hand...
When they dig me out, 
that's when they'll
understand, that,
A one sided mountain 
is not 
worth the climb,
and a one sided love 
will 
leave you 
frozen in time.

John Derek Hamilton
November 16,2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kimathi Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 9:03 AM
Congrats John, for your WIN with this fine piece!! ;-)
Hamilton Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 5:22 PM
Thanks Teddy, nice to see you again!
Kendrick Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 9:57 AM
Good work..Very descriptive words and phrasing..I enjoyed reading it this morning..Have a blessed day..Sara
Hamilton Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 1:38 PM
Thanks Sara
B. Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 3:48 PM
Wow! This is such a great write.
Hamilton Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 8:53 PM
Thanks Carol
Turner Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 3:36 PM
John, this is great! I am not a big fan of winter either but at least in the south we don't get snows you guys get. I'll be lucky to see snow at all. Really loved this poem, John:)
Hamilton Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 8:53 PM
Thanks Daniel, for the visit and positive feedback.
Sands Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 1:18 PM
Such in depth expression. Well written, John.
Hamilton Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 8:54 PM
Thanks Heidi
Onclaud Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 12:00 PM
such deep longing and anguish in your wonderful write, john.. well done!.. huggs
Hamilton Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 8:54 PM
Thanks Nette.
Green Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 11:28 AM
Such a deep and sad tale you have created here John. This was as wonderful as it was heartbreaking. Nicely expressed.
Hamilton Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 8:55 PM
Thanks Chris just a simple winter metaphor.
P  Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 10:06 AM
Nice theme carried throughout, and the sentiment was spot on that dusty mountaintop! :) Love 'Sirocco winds'!
Hamilton Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 10:19 AM
Thanks Paloma
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