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Frozen In Pretense

truth is abandoned - falsehood clings to hollow minds like snow covered trees deceit is burdensome, making weary minds numb, frozen in pretense 12-29-19 Ku Duet Poetry Contest Sponsor: Silent One

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/8/2020 8:27:00 PM

Congrats on your podium finish, Joseph. Well done.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/4/2020 9:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your in Silent One's contest. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2020 6:07:00 PM

congrats for your win, JOseph. great imagery!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/4/2020 1:30:00 PM

- A beautiful ku duet, Joseph :) - Congratulations on a 2st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Hamilton

Date: 1/4/2020 8:14:00 AM

Nice write Joseph, congrats on your placement!

Joseph May
Date: 1/4/2020 10:34:00 AM

Thank you for my placement Silent..

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/4/2020 8:08:00 AM

Hi Joseph, a wonderful write congratulations and a wonderful 2020. Blessings, Jennifer.

Silent One

Date: 1/4/2020 7:39:00 AM

yes... you are right, but some never learn.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.

FJ Thomas

Date: 1/1/2020 12:57:00 AM

Wow Joseph... this is a wonderful ku duet! I'm not sure what else to say lol. I just keep rereading it.

Charles Messina

Date: 12/31/2019 8:52:00 AM

Love this piece, Joseph. Best wishes in the contest. Wishing you and yours a very Healthy and Happy New Year! Charlie

Joseph May
Date: 12/31/2019 2:04:00 PM

Thank you Charles, A Happy and Healthy New Year to you and yours also

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/30/2019 9:37:00 PM

"falsehood clings to hollow minds" I completely agree. Oh my!!! There is so much truth around each and every word. So beautifully written and presented. Happy New Year!! ~ Brandy

Joseph May
Date: 12/30/2019 9:59:00 PM

Thank you Brandy, Happy New Year..