Audrey Haick Poet Nonet

Frozen In Past

Crucial change of thoughts seems undesired
Persistent self-indulgence thrives
Pleads for reason lay in dust
And heart still needs mending!
Circumstance impel
Frozen in past
Must let go
Escape
Trap!

~*~

Note: Let the past go to embrace the best that this time has to offer.  My prayers 
are always for you.

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Gerard Keogh Jr. March 1, 2011 at 6:43 PM I give a top mark for the ending which is unforced and poignant. Regards, Gerard.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 28, 2011 at 4:02 PM Good advice Annalise my friend and one we should all heed luv.. the Nonet is my favorite form besides Rhyme.. am thinking for my next contest ... enjoyed with luv..

Gert W. Knop February 27, 2011 at 6:05 AM Yes, Annalise, great message you have penned here1 Enjoyed ther read this early Sunday afternoon!...All the best, Gert

Elaine George February 25, 2011 at 9:10 AM Wonderful uplifting Nonet, Annalise. Lainie

Jancarl Campi February 25, 2011 at 8:18 AM THanks for your comment on my most recent work. I like the verse you have penned here. Thanks for sharing your work. Take care and keep your muse happy, Jancarl

Andrea Dietrich February 24, 2011 at 11:48 PM Hey it is nice to see this one stayed on the new poems list even since yesterday!! but darn, now it is on the bottom!

Nette Onclaud February 24, 2011 at 10:56 PM lol.. sleepy again, anna!.." this is a nonet, nette." soweee..:) huggs!

Sara Kendrick February 24, 2011 at 2:20 PM Enjoyed reading your work this afternoon..I am glad that I chose this as one of my ones to read today..Thanks for stopping by my blog..The encouraging words left lifted me..Sara

Wilma Neels February 24, 2011 at 10:26 AM A poignant message Annalise, I enjoyed your Nonet tonight, hope your day's been good thus far.. ;-) love Will

Dr.Ram Mehta February 24, 2011 at 4:31 AM Soup Mail!!!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta February 24, 2011 at 4:27 AM Quite moving expressions, Annalise. Soup Mail!!!!!

Tahera Mannan February 24, 2011 at 3:12 AM Very touching Anna. i have to let go of so much too.

Audrey Haick February 23, 2011 at 11:47 PM Thanks Nette, It is a Nonet. Looks like you're sleepy too!

Audrey Haick February 23, 2011 at 11:46 PM Thanks Andrea! Yep. It's time I went to bed!

Nette Onclaud February 23, 2011 at 11:32 PM a searing tanka with a humanistic touch, anna... you awe me with this gem! :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich February 23, 2011 at 10:40 PM Say, this is very nice, but are you sure it is tanka? To me it looks like that nonet(?) type of poetry. GOod note you left on letting go of the past!