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Frozen In Past

Crucial change of thoughts seems undesired Persistent self-indulgence thrives Pleads for reason lay in dust And heart still needs mending! Circumstance impel Frozen in past Must let go Escape Trap! ~*~ Note: Let the past go to embrace the best that this time has to offer. My prayers are always for you.

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Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 3/1/2011 6:43:00 PM

I give a top mark for the ending which is unforced and poignant. Regards, Gerard.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/28/2011 4:02:00 PM

Good advice Annalise my friend and one we should all heed luv.. the Nonet is my favorite form besides Rhyme.. am thinking for my next contest ... enjoyed with luv..

Gert W. Knop

Date: 2/27/2011 6:05:00 AM

Yes, Annalise, great message you have penned here1 Enjoyed ther read this early Sunday afternoon!...All the best, Gert

Elaine George

Date: 2/25/2011 9:10:00 AM

Wonderful uplifting Nonet, Annalise. Lainie

Jancarl Campi

Date: 2/25/2011 8:18:00 AM

THanks for your comment on my most recent work. I like the verse you have penned here. Thanks for sharing your work. Take care and keep your muse happy, Jancarl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/24/2011 11:48:00 PM

Hey it is nice to see this one stayed on the new poems list even since yesterday!! but darn, now it is on the bottom!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/24/2011 10:56:00 PM

lol.. sleepy again, anna!.." this is a nonet, nette." soweee..:) huggs!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/24/2011 2:20:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work this afternoon..I am glad that I chose this as one of my ones to read today..Thanks for stopping by my blog..The encouraging words left lifted me..Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/24/2011 10:26:00 AM

A poignant message Annalise, I enjoyed your Nonet tonight, hope your day's been good thus far.. ;-) love Will

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/24/2011 4:31:00 AM

Soup Mail!!!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/24/2011 4:27:00 AM

Quite moving expressions, Annalise. Soup Mail!!!!!

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/24/2011 3:12:00 AM

Very touching Anna. i have to let go of so much too.

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/23/2011 11:47:00 PM

Thanks Nette, It is a Nonet. Looks like you're sleepy too!

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/23/2011 11:46:00 PM

Thanks Andrea! Yep. It's time I went to bed!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/23/2011 11:32:00 PM

a searing tanka with a humanistic touch, anna... you awe me with this gem! :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2011 10:40:00 PM

Say, this is very nice, but are you sure it is tanka? To me it looks like that nonet(?) type of poetry. GOod note you left on letting go of the past!