Brenda Meier-Hans Poet Crystalline

Frozen In Crystalline- Number- 6

The lake captures winter's rare beauty,
                                       before her waters crystallise.



                                    Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
                                                   11.21.2014
                                                 Syllables 9 + 8
                                                        8tth

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 30, 2014 at 12:16 PM A lovely winter scene described, Brenda! Congrats to you on an awesome win!! Hugs, Rhonda

Pandita Sietesantos November 30, 2014 at 9:55 AM Barbara, what a beautiful piece - you captured the essence in two short lovely lines! Congratulations on your great well-deserved win! Pandita.

Skat A November 30, 2014 at 1:56 AM BRENDA, Congratulations with your awesome "Frozen In Crystalline" win. ~SKAT~

Sandra Haight November 29, 2014 at 6:26 PM Hi Brenda, congratulations for your win for your lovely crystalline! Hugs, Sandra

Shadow Hamilton November 29, 2014 at 1:26 PM breath taking Brenda congrats on win hugs

Jan Allison November 29, 2014 at 12:27 PM I cant believe i missed this little beauty first time - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick November 29, 2014 at 11:31 AM Congrats on your winning work..There are some very interesting and descriptive works in the winner's list..A fine group of poets gather at this soup pot..Sara

Robert Stoner Jr November 29, 2014 at 10:24 AM congratulations Brenda on another fine win ,well done

Richard Lamoureux November 29, 2014 at 9:28 AM So good to see you on the winners list, congratulations.

Paul Callus November 29, 2014 at 6:34 AM Ohhh! this is very lovely, Brenda! Missed it before, but luckily found it on the winners' list! I can imagine the reflections, before that natural mirror gives way to ice. Congrats on a deserved win. // paul

Joseph May November 29, 2014 at 6:14 AM Wonderful write Brenda...Congrats on your win

Kayod5 Kayode November 29, 2014 at 1:27 AM Congrats on the win Brenda and happy Weekend...huggs

Andrea Dietrich November 29, 2014 at 1:01 AM a lovely description of picture number six, brenda. congrats in my contest and thanks for your support.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 26, 2014 at 5:02 PM your first line is captivating, i imagine frozen.. :) when elsa succeeddingly turned everything to ice.. :) Brenda Meier-Hans November 26, 2014 at 5:31 PM Hahaha, I forgot about that but yes, that's about it.

Debbie Guzzi November 25, 2014 at 6:48 PM A fine portrayal of the image (winter's) and check with Andie IF the end words have to rhyme hon. LIght & Love Brenda Meier-Hans November 25, 2014 at 10:38 PM Thanks so much Debbie.

Shadow Hamilton November 25, 2014 at 4:35 AM love it Brenda gl in contest hugs Brenda Meier-Hans November 25, 2014 at 7:24 AM Thanks Shadow.

Nette Onclaud November 24, 2014 at 9:28 AM ohhh,i like the perceived consequence of waters being crystallized,brenda... how unique and vivid!.. huggs Brenda Meier-Hans November 24, 2014 at 2:47 PM Thank you Nette

Cherl Dunn November 23, 2014 at 9:23 PM Simply beautiful, cheri Brenda Meier-Hans November 24, 2014 at 2:47 PM Thanks Cheri

Maurice Yvonne November 23, 2014 at 6:46 AM Beautiful, Brenda. Good luck in the contest. Brenda Meier-Hans November 24, 2014 at 2:45 PM Thanks Maurice.

Gary Bateman November 22, 2014 at 4:20 PM Brenda, A very well-penned write here and a "7" from me. Good Luck in the contest!! I'm sure you'll do very well. Alles Gute!! Gary Brenda Meier-Hans November 24, 2014 at 2:45 PM Thank you Gary.

Sandip Goswami November 22, 2014 at 1:35 PM Super...Multiple meanings...I love it...Thank you very much...Long live your big heart... Brenda Meier-Hans November 22, 2014 at 2:33 PM Thank you so much Sandip

Richard Lamoureux November 22, 2014 at 9:28 AM This is pretty Brenda. Brenda Meier-Hans November 22, 2014 at 2:31 PM Thanks Richard.

Sara Kendrick November 22, 2014 at 7:58 AM Very descriptive work ..I enjoyed the beauty captured in these few words..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Brenda Meier-Hans November 22, 2014 at 8:16 AM Thanks Sara.

Reason A. Poteet November 22, 2014 at 5:40 AM You capitalize on winter's beauty just beyond she turns brutal. But then again, I can visualize the next scene - graceful skaters on the ice. A beautiful crystalline, Brenda, best of luck in the judging. Brenda Meier-Hans November 22, 2014 at 8:15 AM The skaters would add to the beauty. Thanks Reason.

Shadow Hamilton November 22, 2014 at 3:39 AM clever and very beautiful Brenda gl in contest hugs 7 Brenda Meier-Hans November 22, 2014 at 8:14 AM Thank you Shadow.

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