Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Crystalline

Frozen In Crystalline - 2

FROZEN IN CRYSTALLINE - 2

The icy feather flakes flitter hush--
swirl free to sprawl on midnight mush.

©O.E. Guillermo
Sponsor	Andrea Dietrich
Contest Name	Frozen In Crystalline 
Placed 5th

5:22 pm, November 24, 2014

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 30, 2014 at 6:44 PM A lovely winter scene, Olive! Congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 6, 2015 at 7:38 AM thanks much Rhonda.. :)! hugs too

Skat A November 30, 2014 at 1:52 AM OLIVE, Congratulations with your awesome "Frozen In Crystalline" win. ~SKAT~ Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 6, 2015 at 7:39 AM thanks much Skat.. :)

Nette Onclaud November 30, 2014 at 12:37 AM eloi, you thrill me with your flowing words.. ang galeng!..cheers to you for your great win Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 6, 2015 at 7:39 AM thanks much Nette.. :) GAling mo din.. :)!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 29, 2014 at 10:33 PM Wonderful imagery Olive! Congrats on ur awesome win! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 6, 2015 at 7:41 AM thanks much Dr. Upma.. :D

Maurice Yvonne November 29, 2014 at 9:33 PM Congratulations Olive on your win!

Shadow Hamilton November 29, 2014 at 1:04 PM wonderful Olive congrats on win hugs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 6, 2015 at 7:40 AM thanks much Shadow.. :)!

Jan Allison November 29, 2014 at 12:16 PM Dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux November 29, 2014 at 8:46 AM Nicely done Olive. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 29, 2014 at 10:03 PM thanks much Sir.. :)!

Sara Kendrick November 29, 2014 at 7:09 AM Congrats on your winning entry..There were some very creative works on the list..Such a talented group of writers gathered at this soup pot....Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 6, 2015 at 7:39 AM thanks much Sara.. :) You are talented too.. :D!

Paul Callus November 29, 2014 at 5:41 AM Back with merited congratulations, Olive_eloi!! I had no doubt this would be on the winners' list. hugs // paul

Len Gasun November 29, 2014 at 1:48 AM I love what you did here my dear friend Olive! Thumbs up and big congratulations on your well-deserved win! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 6, 2015 at 7:37 AM Thanks much Leonora.. :)! I appreciate it. :) God bless you always..

Andrea Dietrich November 29, 2014 at 12:43 AM Love the first line's alliteration, dear. great imagery! And congrats to you. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 30, 2014 at 9:06 AM :) thanks much Andrea.. :)!

Paul Callus November 26, 2014 at 3:50 PM Hi Olive_eloi! You make these icy flakes sound nice and attractive, mostly through use of alliteration. I like:) hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 26, 2014 at 4:47 PM hahahah Paul.. :) I tried to incorporate as much poetical devices in these two lines.. :O though i hope it's okei.. :) thanks as always.. :) there are sound words, alliteration, metaphor, rhyme.. :O

James Fraser November 25, 2014 at 1:55 PM Love when so few words image so much, James :) James Fraser November 26, 2014 at 12:03 PM As is mine Olive, good start if I may say you :):) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 26, 2014 at 8:39 AM :) thanks much this my first try by the way.. :D

Faye Gibson November 24, 2014 at 2:55 PM Hi, Olive, Finally getting back to normal...if life ever is normal. lol. I am loving all of these two line beauties. Thanks for asking about me. How are you doing? Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 24, 2014 at 3:12 PM thanks much Faye.. :) YOu crossed my mind.. :)! Im doing alright thank you.. :D

Jan Allison November 24, 2014 at 7:58 AM beautiful imagery and I love the alliteration Olive- good luck:-) hugs Jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser November 24, 2014 at 3:10 PM thanks much Jan.,, :D shall write soon.. :D!