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Frozen In Crystaline - 4

A pearly pristine path leading me calmly to my final reading.
11~26~2014 Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Contest Name: Frozen In Crystalline
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 12/2/2017 12:09:00 AM
Another superb, profound crystalline poem.
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Date: 11/12/2016 10:17:00 AM
Excellent poem, Maurice. I don't have a clue about contests, but I guess congrats are in order. Very good write though. Love and peace, my friend.
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Date: 11/30/2014 6:32:00 PM
I love your interpretation of the picture, Maurice...very beautiful and peaceful, not an ending but a beginning! Congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 11/30/2014 1:53:00 AM
MAURICE, Congratulations with your awesome "Frozen In Crystalline" win. ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/30/2014 12:46:00 AM
here again to send you my sweet congrats, Maurice!
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Date: 11/29/2014 6:15:00 PM
Hi Maurice, wow...your poem gave me goosebumps! The picture and your verbal image are one! Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Sandra
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Date: 11/29/2014 1:10:00 PM
back with congrats Maurice hugs
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Date: 11/29/2014 12:19:00 PM
many many congrats my friend:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/29/2014 12:05:00 PM
Beautifully merged are the photo and your mood created Maurice...thank you so much for your comments on mine as well..much appreciated
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Date: 11/29/2014 8:56:00 AM
Life's celestial final walk, it is! Why you wanna amend it? That's what I thought too. Very nicely written. I love it.
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Date: 11/29/2014 8:55:00 AM
A sad one, congratulations.
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Date: 11/29/2014 7:11:00 AM
Congrats on your winning entry..There were some very creative works on the list..Such a talented group of writers gathered at this soup pot....Sara
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Date: 11/29/2014 6:20:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Maurice..
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Date: 11/29/2014 1:14:00 AM
Congrats on the win Maurice,your words glitter...huggs
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Date: 11/29/2014 12:49:00 AM
Love the two words pearly and pristine together, Maurice. Your words capture the essence of the picture. I am most curious about this "final reading!" Congrats in my contest and thanks so much for supporting it.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 11/29/2014 5:29:00 AM
The picture reminded me of what passing on must be, celestial, calm, I saw it as life's final walk. I will now amend it try to improve on it. Thank you for placing me so high. lots of love.
Date: 11/27/2014 3:14:00 PM
Excellent crystalline, Maurice. Your final reading must be where that light is far away...long way to go yet! // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/29/2014 5:49:00 AM
Back with much deserved congratulations, Maurice!! Well done! // paul
Date: 11/26/2014 7:54:00 PM
many years left in you yet Maurice wonderful rendition gl in contest hugs
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Date: 11/26/2014 2:56:00 PM
You captured the image to perfection Maurice great alliteration and a fabulous final line - good luck in the contest my friend:-) hugs jan xxx 7+fave
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Date: 11/26/2014 1:02:00 PM
Love the alliteration in the first line..As a whole it is amazing.
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Date: 11/26/2014 11:48:00 AM
This crystalline goes perfectly with the pic. Andrea is going to love it.
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Date: 11/26/2014 10:17:00 AM
So beautiful is this crystalline Maurice! Gl in contest!
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Date: 11/26/2014 10:06:00 AM
For some reason Frank Sinatra's song my way won't get out of my head. Maybe final reading verses final curtain. Well done Crystalline Maurice. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/26/2014 9:57:00 AM
Wow, a punch at the end!! What a great way to add drama to at frozen picture -- it adds major heat . . . so many questions . . . what does he mean . . . you are a master at bringing in the reader, opening the door of our imagination and then stepping back. Well done my good friend.
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Date: 11/26/2014 9:54:00 AM
amazing word choice, maurice.. the second line packs a sweet, frosty wallop... i can see this on the winners' page.. huggs
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