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Frozen In Crystaline - 4

A pearly pristine path leading
me calmly to my final reading.

11~26~2014
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
Contest Name: Frozen In Crystalline

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Mick Talbot

Date: 12/2/2017 12:09:00 AM

Another superb, profound crystalline poem.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/12/2016 10:17:00 AM

Excellent poem, Maurice. I don't have a clue about contests, but I guess congrats are in order. Very good write though. Love and peace, my friend.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/30/2014 6:32:00 PM

I love your interpretation of the picture, Maurice...very beautiful and peaceful, not an ending but a beginning! Congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda

Skat A

Date: 11/30/2014 1:53:00 AM

MAURICE, Congratulations with your awesome "Frozen In Crystalline" win. ~SKAT~

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/30/2014 12:46:00 AM

here again to send you my sweet congrats, Maurice!

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/29/2014 6:15:00 PM

Hi Maurice, wow...your poem gave me goosebumps! The picture and your verbal image are one! Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Sandra

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/29/2014 1:10:00 PM

back with congrats Maurice hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 11/29/2014 12:19:00 PM

many many congrats my friend:-) Hugs jan xx

David Mohn

Date: 11/29/2014 12:05:00 PM

Beautifully merged are the photo and your mood created Maurice...thank you so much for your comments on mine as well..much appreciated

Abdul Malik

Date: 11/29/2014 8:56:00 AM

Life's celestial final walk, it is! Why you wanna amend it? That's what I thought too. Very nicely written. I love it.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/29/2014 8:55:00 AM

A sad one, congratulations.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/29/2014 7:11:00 AM

Congrats on your winning entry..There were some very creative works on the list..Such a talented group of writers gathered at this soup pot....Sara

Joseph May

Date: 11/29/2014 6:20:00 AM

Congrats on a fine win Maurice..

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/29/2014 1:14:00 AM

Congrats on the win Maurice,your words glitter...huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2014 12:49:00 AM

Love the two words pearly and pristine together, Maurice. Your words capture the essence of the picture. I am most curious about this "final reading!" Congrats in my contest and thanks so much for supporting it.

Maurice Yvonne
Date: 11/29/2014 5:29:00 AM

The picture reminded me of what passing on must be, celestial, calm, I saw it as life's final walk. I will now amend it try to improve on it. Thank you for placing me so high. lots of love.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/27/2014 3:14:00 PM

Excellent crystalline, Maurice. Your final reading must be where that light is far away...long way to go yet! // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 11/29/2014 5:49:00 AM

Back with much deserved congratulations, Maurice!! Well done! // paul

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/26/2014 7:54:00 PM

many years left in you yet Maurice wonderful rendition gl in contest hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 11/26/2014 2:56:00 PM

You captured the image to perfection Maurice great alliteration and a fabulous final line - good luck in the contest my friend:-) hugs jan xxx 7+fave

Tim Smith

Date: 11/26/2014 1:02:00 PM

Love the alliteration in the first line..As a whole it is amazing.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/26/2014 11:48:00 AM

This crystalline goes perfectly with the pic. Andrea is going to love it.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/26/2014 10:17:00 AM

So beautiful is this crystalline Maurice! Gl in contest!

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/26/2014 10:06:00 AM

For some reason Frank Sinatra's song my way won't get out of my head. Maybe final reading verses final curtain. Well done Crystalline Maurice. Good luck in the contest.

David Meade

Date: 11/26/2014 9:57:00 AM

Wow, a punch at the end!! What a great way to add drama to at frozen picture -- it adds major heat . . . so many questions . . . what does he mean . . . you are a master at bringing in the reader, opening the door of our imagination and then stepping back. Well done my good friend.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/26/2014 9:54:00 AM

amazing word choice, maurice.. the second line packs a sweet, frosty wallop... i can see this on the winners' page.. huggs

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