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Frozen Heart

FROZEN HEART An icebreaker in The arctic, My love for you has become, Skirting large ice caps of Indifference That surrounds your desolate Heart! © Demetrios Trifiatis 25 MAY 2013

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/25/2013 10:54:00 AM

- Your love will warm her heart, amazing written Demetrios! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/25/2013 3:17:00 PM

Thank you dear Anne-Lise, so kind of you to visit!

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/25/2013 9:44:00 AM

there is two sides to everthing including love,, you write your poetry so well...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/25/2013 10:12:00 AM

Dear Harry, Thank you for your visit and your comment! Of course, there are two sides to everything for, as Greek mythology tells us, when Zeus decided to create the world he took the opposites: cold-hot, wet-arid, hard-soft, male female and so on and after changing himself to the God of love, EROS, he managed to create the world by uniting the opposites into a harmonious whole. Therefore to everything we find its opposite and, as you say, this includes love. However, we chose the side we like to be.

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/25/2013 6:18:00 AM

This is a tremendous and sad write my friend! I would think this to be a depressive poem actually, but it is so well written...an excellent piece! Just like your title, I feel that this woman (I made the person a woman) as having a "Frozen Heart"! A wonderful poem you have written, a supremely written piece, Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/25/2013 7:17:00 AM

Russell, of course she is a woman! I am Greek! Ha-ha! Actually, the poem is not depressive but optimistic for he believes so much in the power of love that goes through all this trouble to liberate her heart and warm her as to become his! Thank you so much my friend for your comment!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/25/2013 3:31:00 AM

eksixhisa...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/25/2013 4:45:00 AM

Nai!Thank you!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/25/2013 3:30:00 AM

KATAPLIKTIKOS!!!! Then exo logia! BRAVO!!!! 7

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/25/2013 4:46:00 AM

You very kind and generous! Thank you Eileen!