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21.01.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Fibonacci Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Ink Empress

3rd place in the contest

(The White Bear King Valemon

is a Norwegian fairy tale)

- Frozen Flowers -


The
cold
frost rose
Surprising,
grows on fresh sea ice
eye-catching ice-crystal structures
Imagine picking frost flowers in the Polar night
an adventurous place where it is possible to meet the white bear King Valemon

beautywinterfibonacci

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Ink Empress

January 27, 2024 at 10:51 AM

Creative and descriptive write really. Love the way you’ve painted imagery in this fibonacci, congratulations on your win. Thank you for sharing this with us

Kim Rodrigues

January 23, 2024 at 11:43 AM

Imagination goes there! Nice!

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 24, 2024 at 2:43 AM

- Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

January 23, 2024 at 9:34 AM

Anne-Lise, Your verse aptly encapsulates the awe-inspiring splendor of the arctic terrain. Frost blossoms and the white bear King Valemon comprise a charming visualization.

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 24, 2024 at 2:43 AM

- Thank you very much, Las :) - hugs

Karen Jones

January 22, 2024 at 11:47 PM

Cool winter poem with lovely imagery

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 24, 2024 at 2:43 AM

- Thank you very much, Karen :) - hugs

JC Brul

January 22, 2024 at 1:57 PM

magnificent imagery cleverly captured! BW in the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 24, 2024 at 2:43 AM

- Thank you very much, Jcb :) - hugs

Nancy Kaufman

January 22, 2024 at 1:13 PM

Dear Anne-Lise, Your words painted a poignant picture with their imagery. Enjoyed this form which is quite unfamiliar to me. Best wishes in your contest dear Poetess.

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 24, 2024 at 2:42 AM

- Thank you very much, Nancy :) - hugs

Silent One

January 22, 2024 at 1:02 PM

Nicely done my friend.. Wonderful imagery..

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 24, 2024 at 2:42 AM

- Thank you very much, S.O. :) - hugs

Yann Rolland

January 22, 2024 at 7:05 AM

lovely poem, but i don't know Valemon, i will care, thanks Anne Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 22, 2024 at 7:12 AM

https://www.google.com/search?q=white+bear+king+valemon+fairy+tale&oq=The+White+Bear+King+Valemon&gs_lcrp=EgZjaHJvbWUqCggDEAAYExgWGB4yDgg

Daniel Henry Rodgers

January 22, 2024 at 4:34 AM

Anne,Lise, Your poem beautifully captures the majestic beauty of the polar landscape. The imagery of frost flowers and the white bear King Valemon is truly enchanting. Very Captivating and keep warm! - Blessings, Daniel!

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 24, 2024 at 2:42 AM

- Thank you very much, Daniel :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

January 22, 2024 at 3:04 AM

Oh my poor friend. I prefer a thick quilt. Lovely poem. Hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 22, 2024 at 3:13 AM

- In the winter months we can expect a bit of everything, Victor :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham

January 22, 2024 at 12:39 AM

Brrrr I can feel the chill, your landscape must be amazing to see right now Anne-Lise. Enjoy your week ahead. Tom

Tom Cunningham

January 22, 2024 at 11:30 AM

Another heading our way, they're beginning to get on my nerves lol.

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 22, 2024 at 3:05 AM

- We got a lot of the storm that you had ... the temperature turned quickly ... a lot of rain ... all the snow is gone in 24 hours - Almost unbelievable how it happened, Tom - May your week be good :) - hugs

Hilda Greenhough

January 21, 2024 at 7:52 PM

Maybe pick flowers but leave the bear one. This is a intriguing Fibonacci poem of cold, cold places. I smile.

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 22, 2024 at 3:07 AM

- The white bear was a prince, Hilda :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Hiya Sharma

January 21, 2024 at 6:59 PM

Wow, dear Anne-Lise, this fibonacci is so gorgeously crafted with an intriguing touch of fairytale.. The mention of 'white bear King Valemon' is very interesting and also, "grows on fresh sea ice" Ahh, how magically serene.. In fact, every line has a whimsical feeling and especially how you've painted imagery is beyond beautiful "frost rose".. Absolutely loved reading this, best wishes for the contest, keep writing and shining.. Sending light too! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 22, 2024 at 3:11 AM

- Mixed with a bit of adventure and facts... many thanks for your lovely comment, Hiya :) - hugs

Abdullah Alhemaidy

January 21, 2024 at 3:29 PM

Very interesting read!

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 22, 2024 at 3:09 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Abdullah :) - hugs

Jan Allison

January 21, 2024 at 2:48 PM

The imagery is absolutely delightful Anne-Lise I especially love the thought of picking frost flowers and I understand King Valemon was from a Norwegian story tale:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 22, 2024 at 3:09 AM

- Yes, an old Norwegian fairy tale that is known in many countries, Jan :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

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