Frozen Feelings

Frozen Feelings

Like ice and ice
Satin purple ribbon in between
Describe the lines
Echoes, and voice in between
Like a sculpture of an angel
Holding a frozen ice cold heart
She’s the ice princess of your
Fenced in world
Defined by limits of your own mind
Co-sign her heart to dependence
For you can’t overcome the shadows of your past
And the horns sound
To glorify her
And what are you supposed to do 
When the world adores the ice princess
Of your heart
If only you could melt her
To only to chisel her
Into your truest of true beauty queen
But no she’s your angel 
Frozen and unmoving at times
To an exaggerated few

Sing her praises
Compliment her ways
See the angel and not your past
See the in between lines of what is not being said
Hear the silence of her words
That you are her comfort and company
And your heart is irreplaceable to her
Skate an imperfectly perfect line
As the flowers adorn your love
Yeah,  co-sign your lover and skate 
On the ice in the vehicle of your  chariots
And the song never ends
And the story only bends
And the days grow shorter
And the years grow longer
And together you sing a song together
Melted hearts become one beating 
To the sound of its
Own drum

By Susan Mills
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 9/18/2010 5:44:00 PM
Hello, Susan here I am stopping by to say hi and CONGRATULATIONS! What a delightful poem. Had fun reading your featured poem of the week. Take care,.. p.d.
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Date: 9/13/2010 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2010 3:56:00 PM
Congrats Susan on your featured poem this week on the Soup... a nice one to share with us all..with luv..
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Date: 12/2/2009 4:11:00 AM
Excellent narrative Susan. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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