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Frozen Aroma

FROZEN AROMA the wind blowing on new fallen snow a frozen aroma that lingering perfume since you left thinking out a winter window i feature you a flake of snow i tried to touch and hold but gone in a moment forever Dave Austin

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Delice Arleen Skelly
Date: 6/12/2015 5:39:00 AM
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Memories of winter arise in this set of tanka. I love the idea of a frozen aroma. Lovely ~ Delice
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/18/2015 11:18:00 PM
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STill loving this tanka set. I enjoyed your message to me in the comment box. you live to 105, Daver,YOU CAN DO IT.
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Daver Austin
Date: 4/19/2015 10:03:00 AM
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Heh! I'm lucky to still be alive.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 4/17/2015 9:40:00 AM
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Sad and touching, wishing you love and happiness always Armand. Another brilliant write. I learn so much reading you daver. Thank you!
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Michelle Mac Donald
Date: 4/16/2015 7:08:00 AM
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I can smell the snow with this one, Daver...snow does have an aroma. Icycles don't smell though depending on where they're hanging from, some do taste. =/ My favs are the ones hanging from tree branches. This write tastes melancholy...sort of bitter, someone sad and sour. Love you bunches!!! Mikki
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Joe Maverick
Date: 4/13/2015 3:23:00 PM
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Snow..' Wind... Cold..' Brrr...) I would put more but my thoughts got froze.._en))
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 4/5/2015 3:57:00 AM
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Nice!
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Monterey Sirak
Date: 4/4/2015 7:13:00 AM
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Fantastic! You, sir, are a master of the tanka. You pack such feeling into only five lines.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/3/2015 9:28:00 PM
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Daver, these are VERY good tanka, especially the last one. Just love these. And I hope you recover nicely from your hospital stay.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/3/2015 12:34:00 PM
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Ahh!! Enjoyed reading your work..Sara
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Julia Ward
Date: 3/30/2015 1:22:00 AM
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Your poem is delightful, daver. Julia, xx
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James Peranteau
Date: 3/29/2015 12:20:00 PM
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Awesome write dear poet ! I'm so with you on this ! Have a wonderful week my friend.....much love, james
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