Frozen

the cold frozen ice
       distant silence without words
          needs warmth to be heard


Heidi Sands

11/28/17

longingwordshaiku

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MD Johnson

December 22, 2017 at 9:10 AM

There’s depth to this one. Thoroughly enjoyed.

Heidi Sands

December 22, 2017 at 9:12 AM

Thank you MD. I am happy you enjoyed it :)

Sara Kendrick

November 29, 2017 at 3:38 PM

Ahh!! Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Heidi Sands

November 30, 2017 at 7:42 AM

Thank you Sara :)

Akkina Downing

November 29, 2017 at 12:42 PM

I hear you Ms Heidi, and I feel it in my bones... Lol! Fabulous haiku dearest! Hugs and smiles :)

Heidi Sands

November 29, 2017 at 1:21 PM

Hi Akkina, wow. ...you certainly heard it. lol. Thank you :)

Kim Rodrigues

November 28, 2017 at 8:01 PM

Sooo cold! Nice one!

Heidi Sands

November 28, 2017 at 8:15 PM

Thank you Kim! :)

Vijay Pandit

November 28, 2017 at 7:21 PM

Well crafted Haiku..well said!

Heidi Sands

November 28, 2017 at 7:22 PM

Thank you Vijay :)

Jan Allison

November 28, 2017 at 6:00 PM

so few words say so much, so full of longing Heidi!:-) hugs jan xx

Heidi Sands

November 28, 2017 at 6:17 PM

Thank you for your visit and comment Jan :)

Joseph May

November 28, 2017 at 5:45 PM

Beautifully expressed Heidi

Heidi Sands

November 28, 2017 at 5:59 PM

Thank you , Joseph. I appreciate your comment on this :)

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