Frozen

Roses are red, The softness I feel is so smooth.
Your heart is so pure, and your heartbeat is for real.
The pulse of my heartbeat beats for you.
Your strength gives me life.
My lifeline has always been yours.
To my dearest White Dove, I've always been your Quartz.
Your mighty shiny jewel, Which shines with beauty. 
The beauty you love. Whom sleeps when you're gone.
Give me a kiss so that I can feel your vibes. 
I lay here cold waiting for you to be my blanket.
Come warm me up in the winter.
So I can feel the warmth of your touch so close to me.
I lay here so cold upon an alter in your back yard. 
I'm your sleeping beauty waiting for your kiss of truthiness.
The truth is I love you. If you love me dearly bring me back to life. 
I lay here so cold waiting for you to resurrect me. 
I lay here cold with a broken heart. 
A broken heart is waiting for you to assemble. 
Assemble it rapidly so you can feel the beat of my heart. 
The beat of my heart has always been beating for you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 5/24/2017 6:53:00 PM
You chose a good form for your poem. Romanticism indeed!! Very lovely!
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Marilyn Newman
Date: 5/24/2017 8:39:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. =-) I'm glad you enjoyed reading this poem. I look forward into reading more of yours as well.
Date: 5/17/2017 11:13:00 AM
Beautiful write Marilyn, welcome to the Soup, I look forward to reading more from you!
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Marilyn Newman
Date: 5/24/2017 4:14:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed the poem I wrote. Theres many more to come. =-*
Date: 5/10/2017 11:03:00 PM
Resplendent write! Welcome to our ever growing most popular poetry community, Marilyn.
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Marilyn Newman
Date: 5/24/2017 4:24:00 PM
Im glad you enjoyed my poem Maricris. Take care I hope you have a good one. =-)
Date: 5/8/2017 7:01:00 AM
Such a beautiful love poem about a broken heart waiting to be mended. Welcome to PoetrySoup.
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Marilyn Newman
Date: 5/24/2017 4:23:00 PM
Thank you so much for welcoming me to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy more poems coming here soon.
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