Frozen

Is it you that I see
Looking out so thoughtfully
In your mind, do you ever feel adrift?

Like the wind filling the sail’s
On an old wreck of a ship
Slowly disappearing out at sea

Will you forever be
Lost in my memory
It’s hard as I watch you drift away

Into the dark rain you slip
Lost inside the waves hidden rips
There is silence on the frozen artists lips

Will you forever be
Lost in your memory
Sailing out the world on many ships

If it’s you that I see
Watching out so thoughtfully
I would say I love you, but it’s frozen on my lips
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 6/9/2015 10:11:00 AM
:) thanks for the reply
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Date: 6/9/2015 9:33:00 AM
Hi Cynthia, thank you for the soup mail. But, for some reason I can not respond :(. I hope everything works out for you. I know how it is, to have it all pile up at once. Sending warm hugs... LINDA
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 6/9/2015 9:50:00 AM
me either, I am just happy for the reply, everything has a way of working out, talk soon, :)
Date: 4/5/2015 10:29:00 PM
CYNTHIA, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 4/6/2015 4:21:00 AM
thank you linda, i had a very nice easter, :), hoping you are well,:)
Date: 10/2/2014 9:40:00 AM
I like your message and your organization of thought. This is nostalgia well written with a twist - kind of bittersweet. Love, daver
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 10/2/2014 9:49:00 AM
thank you daver, I was reading your haikus. all nice, you are on a nice wave length yourself :)
Date: 9/25/2014 7:19:00 PM
Hi once again, this is deep, and it makes me feel, a drift, from your unspoken lips. Maybe in time, you well share how you feel...Love Linda
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 9/26/2014 4:08:00 AM
I would always share how I feel with "you" linda, I try telling everyone in my writing but some things lay silent, and lie down wounded, maybe forever, some will heal and come to the surface,
Date: 9/25/2014 7:11:00 PM
Hi Cynthia, WOW... this has an amazing flow, not once did I lose grip when reading your poem.. WOW.. I just love it, I'm gonna read it again... Linda
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 9/26/2014 4:03:00 AM
you :) are just a sweet heart linda
Date: 9/24/2014 9:19:00 PM
I really loved reading your poem Cynthia, very moving.
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Cynthia Ferguson
Date: 9/25/2014 4:43:00 AM
thank you :)
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