Frozen

Snow creeping drifting down
Falling slowly toward the ground
As October skies turn gray
Growing colder along the way
Silence haunting in the night
Wolves baying giving a fright
Hearing footsteps in the wind
In the darkness it begins
A chill running down the spine
An eery wind blows through the pine
A figure forming in the distance
He who chases with persistence
Getting closer with every stride
His eyes glowing with determined pride
Shaking feet paralyzed with fear
Watching weary as he draws near
Finally catching his elusive prey
Too late to try running away
Surrendering to this evil man
Without a fight taking his hand
Still freezing as we leave
Promising no warmth upon this eve

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/20/2012 12:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your Halloween Night contest win Ashley. Love, Carol
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Ashley Abraham
Date: 10/6/2012 10:12:00 AM
thank you :)
Date: 9/20/2012 5:41:00 AM
Sure can be a scary evening, well done. Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 10/6/2012 10:12:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 9/19/2012 9:14:00 PM
ASHLEY, congratulations in Gail's spectacular and eerie "Halloween Night " contest. Much enjoyed stopping by to read and devote myself to the soup.. :-) always~ PD
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Ashley Abraham
Date: 10/6/2012 10:13:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 9/19/2012 2:41:00 AM
Congratulations on this terrific win Ashley xx
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Ashley Abraham
Date: 9/19/2012 9:20:00 AM
Thank you!! It was completely unexpected!!
Date: 9/18/2012 9:40:00 PM
CONGRATS ASHLEY ON A SUPER WRITE AND FIRST PLACE WIN LUV ..
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Ashley Abraham
Date: 9/19/2012 9:19:00 AM
Thank you!! Never expected that to happen!
Date: 9/12/2012 12:32:00 PM
Usually rhyme has a light and upbeat feel, but I really love how you've darkened it and created this awesome tale. Love it! - Alexa
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Ashley Abraham
Date: 9/12/2012 2:26:00 PM
Thank you :)
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