Frowziness

The epitome of frowziness
Unkempt, with a dash of wild
Stylishly disheveled
Beneath an unexpected
Yellow bow.

Soft stains accentuate
The drape of her dress
Highlighting invisible features
Pencil drawing
On a moving canvas

Gliding smoothly
In unlaced ballet slippers
Leaving no trace
But the hint
Of her presence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
June 24, 2023 at 12:07 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your "frowziness"  write. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away..................
Alex Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 10:34 PM
A very beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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