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Frosty the Snowman and Crystal Get Caught In the Sun

Frosty the Snowman and Crystal love made in heaven
Went sailing on a small iceberg as the wind was wailing
Their day brighten in the sun as they started melting
Tears trickled, they started bailing towards Gates of Heaven


12/22/2021

A Funny Christmas Themed 4 Liner Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
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Dietrich Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 9:51 AM
Yours told quite a tale in a few lines, Eve. Very well done. Also I enjoy the deeper meaning.
Kitchin Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 9:02 AM
Eve, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute poem!
Smith Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 8:43 AM
Very symbolic. Too many only dig themselves a deeper hole when things go pear shaped. Merry Christmas Eve and all the best for 20222 David in NZ
Koplin Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 8:33 AM
Nice one Eve!
Messina Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 5:26 AM
Well, I guess we can say their hearts truly melted together! Best wishes in the contest, Eve. Wishing you and your family a very Merry Christmas and a Healthy & Happy New Year! Hugs Charlie
Cunningham Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 3:49 AM
Good for us a thaw was on the way, not so for Frosty and Crystal. Good luck in the contest Eve. Merry Christmas Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
December 23, 2021 at 1:24 AM
That was very funny, Eve. Happy Christmas.
Brown Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 8:39 PM
I enjoyed your poem, Merry Christmas ~ Debra
Thalpaguruge Avatar
December 22, 2021 at 7:47 PM
I loved your poem! Thank you for sharing! Happy holidays! - Nathasha
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