Frosty the Snowman and Crystal Get Caught In the Sun

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Frosty the Snowman and Crystal love made in heaven Went sailing on a small iceberg as the wind was wailing Their day brighten in the sun as they started melting Tears trickled, they started bailing towards Gates of Heaven 12/22/2021 A Funny Christmas Themed 4 Liner Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2022 9:51:00 AM

Yours told quite a tale in a few lines, Eve. Very well done. Also I enjoy the deeper meaning.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/9/2022 9:02:00 AM

Eve, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute poem!

David Smith

Date: 12/23/2021 8:43:00 AM

Very symbolic. Too many only dig themselves a deeper hole when things go pear shaped. Merry Christmas Eve and all the best for 20222 David in NZ

Mark Koplin

Date: 12/23/2021 8:33:00 AM

Nice one Eve!

Charles Messina

Date: 12/23/2021 5:26:00 AM

Well, I guess we can say their hearts truly melted together! Best wishes in the contest, Eve. Wishing you and your family a very Merry Christmas and a Healthy & Happy New Year! Hugs Charlie