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Frosty Morn

Way beyond
Iced birdbath
Dead fennel

The garden's 
Frosted fence
Frozen hill

Candescence
Seen through pines
Golden sun     

Tricube poetry form

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Sally Eslinger

February 2, 2023 at 7:13 PM

Fabulous! The words became nusic they flowed their pictures so perfectly. An insrant Fav for me! Hugs sally

Sara Kendrick

February 3, 2023 at 3:48 AM

Thank you, Sally. I am honored that you would fav it. Sara

FJ Thomas

February 1, 2023 at 3:43 PM

Wow Sara, even with such brevity you captured the image so perfectly.

Sara Kendrick

February 2, 2023 at 4:06 AM

Thank you, FJ. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara

Brian Sambourne

January 29, 2023 at 5:49 PM

Vivid images that capture the icy days of winter, pierced by a soothing sun. A most enjoyable Tricube poem. Best wishes, Brian

Sara Kendrick

January 30, 2023 at 3:28 AM

Brian, The soothing sun was so welcomed that day, because it had either rained, drizzled or was foggy plus cloudy for about a week or so it seemed. Thanks for the best wishes. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

January 29, 2023 at 9:45 AM

wonderful imagery, Sara.

Sara Kendrick

January 29, 2023 at 12:36 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

January 28, 2023 at 7:21 PM

Pretty, Sara!

Sara Kendrick

January 29, 2023 at 4:11 AM

Thank you, Kim. Thanks for dropping by and taking time to comment. Sara

Beryl Edmonds

January 28, 2023 at 4:13 PM

A lovely picture painted with words. An excellent Tricube poem Sara… Belle

Sara Kendrick

January 29, 2023 at 4:03 AM

Thank you, Belle. I appreciate you dropping by and taking time to comment. Sara

Jack Horne

January 28, 2023 at 6:26 AM

really enjoyed this form - always love your porch inspiration

Sara Kendrick

January 28, 2023 at 7:53 AM

Actually kitchen inspiration, LOL...I look out my kitchen window wishing I could go out there once again and enjoy the outdoors. Thanks for the visits to my pages. Sara

Valsa George

January 27, 2023 at 8:35 PM

Sara, you seem to have become an expert in tricube form of verse. Beautiful poem.

Sara Kendrick

January 28, 2023 at 4:22 AM

Valsa, I wouldn't say expert. LOL..I know that they could be better and I know that some of you will do so much better. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Harry Horsman

January 27, 2023 at 10:45 AM

Great example of your fine poetry, Dear Sara. Harry, hope soup put this form on the list..

Sara Kendrick

January 27, 2023 at 1:21 PM

Harry, Thank you for your kind review and encouragement. Sara

Mystic Rose Rose

January 27, 2023 at 3:37 AM

I love fennel, though I bought it dry, the fresh summer one must be nice, may the sun shine sweetly on your fence, until spring commences and you can dig in your garden once more, much love, Vie

Sara Kendrick

January 27, 2023 at 5:06 AM

Mystic RR, I/we don't eat the fennel. I have tasted of it, but I guess it must be an acquired taste maybe. It tastes like licorice to me, another flavor I don't really care for. What I bought is called fern leaf fennel and it looks like a fern plant growing. Thanks for dropping by and taking time to leave a message. Sara