Frosted Flakes

I ate a whole box of Frosted Flakes
Oh what a mess that sugar makes
I'd do it again
but diabetes set in
Just smelling it still gives me the shakes

Mdailey    9/30/11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
October 13, 2011 at 10:03 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Favorite Cereal" contest Mike. Love, Carol
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October 9, 2011 at 10:02 PM
Congrats Mike on a great big win with frosted flakes so cool and sweet ..luv..enjoy...
Mehta Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 12:05 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D., mike
Freeman Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 11:50 AM
Mike, Cool job, Congrats on your worthy Limerick. Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 1:38 AM
I love lotsa sugar on ANY cereal, mike. I hope I never get diabetes. Then again, I rarely eat cereal! Congratulations.
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October 9, 2011 at 12:30 AM
DEAR , MIKE, CONGRATULATIONS! ;-) THANKS FOR SUPPORTING MY CONTEST, WITH YOUR FUNNY cereal LIMERICK,..ALWAYS,..P.D.
Lane Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 3:47 PM
But they're GGGRRRREEEAAAATTT!!! Tony
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