Frostbite

Moonshine slips on ice
Silver stars glow despite snow
Frost bitten fingers

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Kim Rodrigues

January 18, 2025 at 10:33 AM

I feel chilly!

Karen Jones

January 18, 2025 at 2:31 PM

Our weather is bipolar as it often is in the teen in the morning and then warmer in the afternoon. Stay warm Kim!!

Ink Empress

January 17, 2025 at 4:29 AM

So beautiful! I love the imagery and how youv used such subtle alliterations too in the second line especially and the last line is brilliant and fitting for this haiku! Sounds so freezing cold. It must be very cold where you are at dear karen: sending you light always

Karen Jones

January 17, 2025 at 5:06 AM

Thanks Inky! The weather here gets quite cold but is bipolar! lol We get early morning freezes and then sometimes the afternoon warms only to refreeze to teens or negative wind chill factors! Hugs have a great weekend!