Frostbite

Moonshine slips on ice Silver stars glow despite snow Frost bitten fingers

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/18/2025 10:33:00 AM

I feel chilly!

Karen Jones
Date: 1/18/2025 2:31:00 PM

Our weather is bipolar as it often is in the teen in the morning and then warmer in the afternoon. Stay warm Kim!!

Ink Empress

Date: 1/17/2025 4:29:00 AM

So beautiful! I love the imagery and how youv used such subtle alliterations too in the second line especially and the last line is brilliant and fitting for this haiku! Sounds so freezing cold. It must be very cold where you are at dear karen: sending you light always

Karen Jones
Date: 1/17/2025 5:06:00 AM

Thanks Inky! The weather here gets quite cold but is bipolar! lol We get early morning freezes and then sometimes the afternoon warms only to refreeze to teens or negative wind chill factors! Hugs have a great weekend!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/16/2025 8:38:00 PM

Ouch. Is this place Alaska? I like the dramatic ending.

Karen Jones
Date: 1/16/2025 8:39:00 PM

Thanks Hilda! lol it’s anywhere it is that deadly cold lol