Frostbite

In the deep bowels of winter
coldness shocks the system
all fauna and floral devoid
of any warmth to survive
in deep freeze weather

Cold allows nothing to melt
throwing hot water in air
will turn it into air crystals 
before hitting the ground
In the deep bowels of winter.

Your breath becomes short
In the bowels of winter
and  nostrils  feel pinched
cheeks have a rosy glow
frostbite looms in a minute or so. 

Sounds of footsteps crunch
upon the white frozen snow
you seek warmth instead of frostbite
in the bowels of winter
you have nowhere to go.

Dreaming of spring
white beaches in the sand
in the bowels of winter
thoughts of warmth
are always on the mind.

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Date: 2/20/2023 10:35:00 PM
Beautiful , I will always take the warmth over frostbite any day.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/24/2023 11:18:00 AM
Thanks for your comment on my winter poem. Yes I agree to take warmth over frostbite. love phyl
Date: 1/17/2023 7:33:00 AM
Your last two lines remind me of a poor person who can only fill his or her tummy with images of the mind which bring forth a hot steamy soup, sometimes they even think they can smell it instead of a crust of bread and a mug of weak tea. Love and hugs Jennifer - a thoroughly enjoyable write my friend.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/26/2023 7:12:00 PM
Thanks for your comment and hot steamy soup or hot coffee warms you on a day like that. Going into the -20c again next week. A good time to stay at home and keep warm. thanks my friend. love phyl
Date: 1/11/2023 1:25:00 PM
I need some hot coffee after this wonderful yet cold write. Guess you also need a cup and a blanket. Stay warm. Blessings............
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/26/2023 7:10:00 PM
Thanks for your comment and yes the cold weather is nice with a hot coffee and a warm blanket to snuggle in. Those days I do not want to go outside. love phyl
Date: 1/11/2023 11:44:00 AM
- I can hardly imagine how cold it is in your place ... hope spring will come early, my friend :) - hugs & love
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/26/2023 7:09:00 PM
Thanks AnneLise for your comment. We are in for another cold cold week next week. Hoping that will be the end before spring. love phyl
Date: 1/9/2023 5:57:00 AM
Phyl l could feel the icy cold reading your poem….in the bowels of winter! Well said…Enjoyed! Debx
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Date: 1/26/2023 7:08:00 PM
Thanks Deb for your comment. We are getting more cold weather next week back to being very cold. love phyl
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