Frost

Sky of crispy blue Frosted crystals translucent Whiten surroundings http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-2.php

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Pamela Griffiths

Date: 10/22/2009 7:01:00 AM

I can see the scene... lovely work. Pam

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/18/2009 7:45:00 AM

A cool, refreshing sight to behold! The imagery in this poem is awesome, James. Great haiku! Love, Carolyn

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/18/2009 4:51:00 AM

James, Being from Florida, I can really appreciate this haiku. Frost is the closest thing to snow that we see. We'll it might snow once every 10 years or so. Thus, comes the love of frost with sweet snowy memories. Thanks for this write. Lovingly, Dane

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/17/2009 9:02:00 PM

thankxxx James for all your comments on my poetry posted today... your Frost poem is so clear I feel I am in it... My Winter Wonders poem has been submitted for the Let It Snow contest.. will be posting more soon and luv entering these contests... u sound like a kool guy... energy attracts like energy.... good thesis for a poem...

John Freeman

Date: 10/17/2009 3:38:00 PM

Brilliant contrast, blue against white,James. Good Job, Man. Sincerely, Moses

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/17/2009 3:27:00 PM

Ice coats everything with a chill. Nicely done. Keep writing. Sara