Frost

frozen in dawn's light white roses shrouded in frost~ kissed by winter's breath December 29th, 2022 Ice, Snow or Frost Haiku Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/6/2023 10:30:00 AM

White roses "kissed by winter's breath." Beautiful picture in the whiteness of winter's gown! Congratulations on your winning placement Lin! Blessings for 2023.

Lin Lane
Date: 1/6/2023 12:33:00 PM

I'm so happy to read your kind message, Sam. Thanks!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/5/2023 9:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "frost" write is lovely. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Lin Lane
Date: 1/6/2023 12:32:00 PM

Many thanks for your thoughts, Paula.

John Lawless

Date: 1/5/2023 9:30:00 AM

winter's stunning good night kiss...nicely done Lin

Lin Lane
Date: 1/6/2023 12:31:00 PM

Thanks, John.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/4/2023 4:12:00 PM

Lin, beautiful imagery, congratulations on your first place win!

Lin Lane
Date: 1/4/2023 4:56:00 PM

I am very happy that you found my Haiku so worthy. Thank you so very much, Tania.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/30/2022 12:46:00 AM

A stunning winter scene Lin. I can feel the chill. Best of luck in the contest and hope the coming New Year brings you good health and happiness. Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 12/30/2022 6:03:00 PM

Thank you very much, Tom.