Frost

on a chill morning
a crisp sheet of white frosting  
coating the paddocks 



29 December 2022
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Eve Roper

January 5, 2023 at 4:41 PM

Julie, congratulations on your win in Tania's contest. A great verse. Many blessings to you

Julie Draper

January 5, 2023 at 5:37 PM

Thanks very much Eve :) happy new year to you :)

Arlo Parker

January 4, 2023 at 7:31 PM

Delightful vision to ponder, Miss Julie. Congrats. ;o]

Julie Draper

January 4, 2023 at 7:40 PM

Thanks very much :)

Tania Kitchin

January 4, 2023 at 4:18 PM

Julie, wonderful imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!

Julie Draper

January 4, 2023 at 4:55 PM

Wow, that's awesome, thank you Tania :) I'm really enjoying attempting haiku, so that's really encouraging :)

Michelle Faulkner

December 28, 2022 at 9:19 PM

Hi Julie, this is very picturesque, I can see white fields and perhaps a horse or two in the distance?

Julie Draper

January 2, 2023 at 5:17 PM

Thanks Michelle :) actually, there is a white horse in the paddock next door that belongs to the neighbours!

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