From You To Me

From you to me 

Love me,
In the woods,
Under a garland of leaves,
On a grass carpet,
That wets my skin,
Love me,
Under a starred sky,
On a white sand carpet,
In the latest august night,
When the sea plays the perfect symphony, 
Shush!
Listen to the melody... 
Love me,
In the place of nowhere,
When our bodies float in the eternal emptiness,
And real is coexisting with dreams,
Look deeply through my eyes,
And,
Let me love you back,
in a perfectly invented place...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 10, 2010 at 2:19 PM
I couldn't help but to return to this write of yours dear poet...just burning in mine thoughts are its beautiful true poetic thoughts ! Congatulations again ! much love, james
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November 10, 2010 at 11:35 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Mirela. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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November 9, 2010 at 5:00 PM
A great free verse poem dear poet...congratulations being featured this week ! Much love, james
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November 8, 2010 at 10:37 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Mirela. Love, Carol
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July 31, 2009 at 11:51 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry today Mirela.I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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