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From Womb To Tomb

WOMB -
Dark and deep inside.
Suffocated and unconscious.
Soul inherits the body.
A new child is born.


In between -
Joys and griefs.
Part and parcel of life.


TOMB -
Life breathes its last.
Soul abandons the body.
Back to the eternity.
Back to dark and deep inside.


From womb to tomb
The soul-cycle continues
From tomb to womb.

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Allan Koven

Date: 12/1/2013 10:52:00 AM

Kiran, A hidden existentialist? Reflection of the eternal questions of life and death. I write about those things too. Good job. Allan

John Posey

Date: 11/7/2013 9:33:00 AM

Very creative writing. You post many intriguing titles.... I'll be back to check some more.... Regards... Jake

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/16/2013 7:48:00 AM

thanks and ya you are welcome.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/23/2013 4:08:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/23/2013 4:37:00 PM

thanks Sara!

Skat A

Date: 10/23/2013 1:11:00 PM

Kiran :) Enjoyed your free verse win.......... Love ~ SKAT ~

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/23/2013 4:37:00 PM

thanks for enjoying!

Karen Anglesey

Date: 10/21/2013 4:36:00 PM

Very much enjoyed this look at the cycles of life..reincarnation? Well written and congrats on your win

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/21/2013 6:14:00 PM

thanks to Karen.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/21/2013 3:05:00 PM

A very deep and thought provoking poem, Kiran. I like it very much! Great work! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind comments. I really appreciate it!

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/21/2013 6:15:00 PM

thank you for liking and commenting.

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/21/2013 11:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Kiram. Cheers! ;)

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/21/2013 6:15:00 PM

thanks, cheers !

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/20/2013 10:38:00 PM

Congrats on the win in the contest, Kiran

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/20/2013 10:56:00 PM

thanks Dr. Ram.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/20/2013 9:18:00 PM

Kiran, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my "FREE VERSE" contest <----- Had fun reading your WIN!! If you'd like:-) Enjoy my latest blog! "THE FOOL" :) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=17055&PoetID=18720 xoxox-------take care & enjoy your coming week. <3 Linda <3

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/20/2013 10:57:00 PM

thanks for the placement Linda.