Kiran Bantawa Poet Free verse

From Womb To Tomb

WOMB -
Dark and deep inside.
Suffocated and unconscious.
Soul inherits the body.
A new child is born.


In between -
Joys and griefs.
Part and parcel of life.


TOMB -
Life breathes its last.
Soul abandons the body.
Back to the eternity.
Back to dark and deep inside.


From womb to tomb
The soul-cycle continues
From tomb to womb.

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Allan Koven December 1, 2013 at 10:52 AM Kiran, A hidden existentialist? Reflection of the eternal questions of life and death. I write about those things too. Good job. Allan

John Posey November 7, 2013 at 9:33 AM Very creative writing. You post many intriguing titles.... I'll be back to check some more.... Regards... Jake Kiran Bantawa November 16, 2013 at 7:48 AM thanks and ya you are welcome.

Sara Kendrick October 23, 2013 at 4:08 PM Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara Kiran Bantawa October 23, 2013 at 4:37 PM thanks Sara!

Skat A October 23, 2013 at 1:11 PM Kiran :) Enjoyed your free verse win.......... Love ~ SKAT ~ Kiran Bantawa October 23, 2013 at 4:37 PM thanks for enjoying!

Karen Anglesey October 21, 2013 at 4:36 PM Very much enjoyed this look at the cycles of life..reincarnation? Well written and congrats on your win Kiran Bantawa October 21, 2013 at 6:14 PM thanks to Karen.

Kelly Deschler October 21, 2013 at 3:05 PM A very deep and thought provoking poem, Kiran. I like it very much! Great work! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind comments. I really appreciate it! Kiran Bantawa October 21, 2013 at 6:15 PM thank you for liking and commenting.

Bukang Liwayway October 21, 2013 at 11:20 AM Congratulations on your win Kiram. Cheers! ;) Kiran Bantawa October 21, 2013 at 6:15 PM thanks, cheers !

Dr.Ram Mehta October 20, 2013 at 10:38 PM Congrats on the win in the contest, Kiran Kiran Bantawa October 20, 2013 at 10:56 PM thanks Dr. Ram.

Poet Destroyer A October 20, 2013 at 9:18 PM Kiran, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my "FREE VERSE" contest <----- Had fun reading your WIN!! If you'd like:-) Enjoy my latest blog! "THE FOOL" :) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=17055&PoetID=18720 xoxox-------take care & enjoy your coming week. <3 Linda <3 Kiran Bantawa October 20, 2013 at 10:57 PM thanks for the placement Linda.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders October 10, 2013 at 10:54 PM Interesting and wise thoughts penned, Kiran...much enjoyed! Love and blessings, Rhonda Kiran Bantawa October 10, 2013 at 10:59 PM enjoyed yours too. Love Kiran.