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From Traces of Anguish

Seasons droop with age trailing like your footprints, gone while anguish leaves me homeless. Above, stars engrave vignettes of our first moondance - - till I burst into bleak tears. Re-post 05/04/2019 Contest of Lu Loo: Best Sedoka- 577- 577

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Date: 6/11/2019 3:20:00 PM
wow, I LOVE this, nette. Congrats to you.
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Date: 6/10/2019 1:10:00 PM
- Congratulations on your beautiful top winning poem, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/15/2017 9:00:00 AM
Touching write bringing out the anguish of separation, nice sedoka, Nette:)
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Date: 8/15/2017 5:09:00 AM
Wow, Nette, you have outdone yourself with this write! My goodness this one is so touching, I love it! I'm going to fav it and I hardly ever fav anything! I truly loved reading this illustrious poem this morning, what a gorgeous piece, Great Work my friend!
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Date: 8/15/2017 3:43:00 AM
Heart-rending poem tenderly excruciating. I am moved by your brilliance!
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Date: 8/14/2017 11:54:00 PM
Beautifully written Nette, good luck in the contest...Maria
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Date: 8/14/2017 7:46:00 PM
remarkable imagery here nette
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Date: 8/14/2017 5:11:00 PM
like holding the hand of your lover where time has passed in comfort...loved this one nette...good luck
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Date: 8/14/2017 5:08:00 PM
A loving tribute--beautifully written--well done nette! Good luck for the contest.
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Date: 8/14/2017 3:59:00 PM
Wow, this is beautiful nette! I love it :)
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