Nette Onclaud Poet Sedoka

From Traces of Anguish

Seasons droop with age
  trailing like your footprints, gone
while anguish leaves me homeless.

Above, stars engrave
  vignettes of our first moondance - -
till I  burst into bleak tears.


Re-post  05/04/2019
Contest of Lu Loo: Best Sedoka- 577- 577

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Andrea Dietrich June 11, 2019 at 3:20 PM wow, I LOVE this, nette. Congrats to you.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 10, 2019 at 1:10 PM - Congratulations on your beautiful top winning poem, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel August 15, 2017 at 9:00 AM Touching write bringing out the anguish of separation, nice sedoka, Nette:)

Russell Sivey August 15, 2017 at 5:09 AM Wow, Nette, you have outdone yourself with this write! My goodness this one is so touching, I love it! I'm going to fav it and I hardly ever fav anything! I truly loved reading this illustrious poem this morning, what a gorgeous piece, Great Work my friend!

Rhoma Em August 15, 2017 at 3:43 AM Heart-rending poem tenderly excruciating. I am moved by your brilliance!

Maria Williams August 14, 2017 at 11:54 PM Beautifully written Nette, good luck in the contest...Maria

Tim Smith August 14, 2017 at 7:46 PM remarkable imagery here nette

Frederic Parker August 14, 2017 at 5:11 PM like holding the hand of your lover where time has passed in comfort...loved this one nette...good luck

Vijay Pandit August 14, 2017 at 5:08 PM A loving tribute--beautifully written--well done nette! Good luck for the contest.

Heidi Sands August 14, 2017 at 3:59 PM Wow, this is beautiful nette! I love it :)