From Then To Beyond

At 7 am.l found time filling 
my mouth with coffee-brimmed grinds; 
my hand circling a porcelain mug
and dropping sugar,cube by cube, 
into the murky liquid; never expecting 
it to be sweet enough to drink

Then by noontime, my fingers 
designed a crepe kite heavily trimmed 
along its tai that it landed 
on a neiahbor's fence. I needec to make
 this day a fruitful one as I feigned sick , 
mumbling on the phone about a vicious cough--- 
frazzled and bored from a dreadful Wednesday, 
yet looking at that dead kite,
I felt really like a champ. My sense of ennui
 tells me, this day is a good one!





For Nayda Ivette Negron  11/23/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Neumann Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 12:35 AM
'Wondrously ageing inside my eyes'. Beautiful. Congratulations. Kai
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November 25, 2016 at 3:09 AM
Bittersweet plighted horizons, love 'pewter of evening', a prayer we should all utter.
White Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 12:05 AM
"Avian beauty, wondrously aging". Worded so beautifully. Congratulations :)
Negron Flores Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 4:26 PM
Congratulations Nette on the placement of the contest.
Kannan Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 9:40 PM
Great imagery... Thought provoking too..I loved the message you have shared... Really a great take on the theme... Good luck with the contest... A BIG 7....
Turner Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 7:00 PM
It is so sad how we humans destroy this planet. Stealing natural habitats for what, money! A beautiful poem nette rich in meaning. I wonder why one has to have a poet's heart to see and understand.
Allison Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 4:37 PM
Such beautiful imagery Nette good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Ongado Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 4:25 PM
Marvelous way to look at creation through its own timeline and being' there' in the presence of a moment!
Y. Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 1:00 PM
Hi Nette, What a beautiful take on the contest theme. Great imagery. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Well done:-) Alexis
Arana Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 11:29 AM
Your poetic vision of nature and life has this eternal element in it. In awe of your talent!
Green Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 10:44 AM
You always paint such gorgeous landscape and nature scenes with your words, as if I am standing a gallery as I read your poetry. Incredibly beautiful Nette
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