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Few years ago, I drifted on a wetland swiveling through the pewter of evening as contours of stately herons unfolded, velvety the feathers white and ablaze by clear Asian ripples of before. Yet, from a visit today, my eyes follow them along weeds..their poses now limp from a gray night through rows of frail blossoms...now, these egrets fumble along a marsh looking old; wobbled feet throttling slow upon those once radiant plumes. In quiet reflection, I imagine these birds' plight amidst nature's environ with a future unknown... How I weep for these heron's destination beyond soiled grasses as I wrap my fingers in prayer, relishing this instance where I gaze at an avian beauty, wondrously aging inside my eyes. Past, Present, Future Contest For Nayda Ivette Negron 11/23/2016

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Date: 11/26/2016 12:35:00 AM
'Wondrously ageing inside my eyes'. Beautiful. Congratulations. Kai
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Date: 11/25/2016 3:09:00 AM
Bittersweet plighted horizons, love 'pewter of evening', a prayer we should all utter.
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Date: 11/25/2016 12:05:00 AM
"Avian beauty, wondrously aging". Worded so beautifully. Congratulations :)
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Date: 11/24/2016 4:26:00 PM
Congratulations Nette on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 11/22/2016 9:40:00 PM
Great imagery... Thought provoking too..I loved the message you have shared... Really a great take on the theme... Good luck with the contest... A BIG 7....
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Date: 11/22/2016 7:00:00 PM
It is so sad how we humans destroy this planet. Stealing natural habitats for what, money! A beautiful poem nette rich in meaning. I wonder why one has to have a poet's heart to see and understand.
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Date: 11/22/2016 4:37:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery Nette good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/22/2016 4:25:00 PM
Marvelous way to look at creation through its own timeline and being' there' in the presence of a moment!
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Date: 11/22/2016 1:00:00 PM
Hi Nette, What a beautiful take on the contest theme. Great imagery. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Well done:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/22/2016 11:29:00 AM
Your poetic vision of nature and life has this eternal element in it. In awe of your talent!
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Date: 11/22/2016 10:44:00 AM
You always paint such gorgeous landscape and nature scenes with your words, as if I am standing a gallery as I read your poetry. Incredibly beautiful Nette
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