From the Tips of Their Fingers

remembered for when the moonlight waned;
the stars grew dizzy and lost their bright;
the wolf leaned on his paws, silently watching;

the darkness grew within, bloodletting.
his mother would see his pale shell;
solitary figure in early morning grief.

pitch, like a spotlight in my bedroom;
specification of dark.
the call won’t come

until after his father wakes up; perhaps,
God granted a few more minutes peace
before the sun melted like wax.

the wax mask would become ashen.
ashes fly like a son from the tips of their fingers.
side by side, together on the mountainside.

ashes leapt into the air, four years past;
halloween, a scare, an early morning reality.
his guitar silenced; his voice on repeat.

teardrops splash off vinyl,
round and round;
seasons come and go…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 24, 2025 at 5:40 PM
a deep poem. I felt sadness at the end. Well done.
Wolf Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 6:29 PM
Profound write, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 24, 2025 at 5:50 AM
Thank you, Gershon. A sad loss.
Hind Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 6:23 PM
This is deep, especially " teardrops splash off vinyl" - it speaks to me of death. I enjoyed reading
Rodrigues Avatar
October 24, 2025 at 5:50 AM
Thank you, Paige. Sad loss.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 23, 2025 at 9:53 AM
I enjoyed reading this write/story. We do not do halloween. "Good Luck" If for a contest. Have a fun day writing away..............
Rodrigues Avatar
October 24, 2025 at 5:51 AM
I don’t do Halloween either. My nephew left us that day. Hugs
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