From the Shadows

From the shadows

The taste of bitterness lingers on tongues
Before it bathes them in anxieties 
And they emerge stripped of mind,
Altering into mindless fiends
As hope drowns in the murky waters
They once come from.

Mothers cry sad songs
As sons and daughters were ripped from breasts
Forced into the lives their keepers know too well
And those resisting struggle for sustenance,
With legs open for a few pennies in pockets 
To chase the hunger away.

As fathers flee like insects 
Their young left in dustbins like rubbish
To propagate in the waste they were born to,
Falling astray becoming wild creatures
And gangs welcome them with a warm embrace
Taught to sling guns and knives until
They rest in small graves.


From the shadows they dwell
Trapped  without hope.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 8/6/2013 5:54:00 PM
A heart wrenching poem....congratulations on your win...
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Date: 8/5/2013 7:47:00 PM
Thanks for entering my contest, much appreciated.
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Date: 8/5/2013 9:58:00 AM
:-) Congratulations!!! ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/5/2013 9:11:00 AM
Ronny... Congratulations in Richard's "Girl Rising." contest.... always *LINDA
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Date: 8/4/2013 5:02:00 PM
The ability to treat concern and love for the young is not a talent.... It is a blessing/ Congratulations on your win.... Jake
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Date: 7/26/2013 12:10:00 AM
what a powerful poem this is. Especially the last two stanzas Wow!! did this one place in the contest?
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Date: 7/25/2013 12:27:00 PM
Awesome poetry Ron; vivid images shared. Enjoy the rest of your week.
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Date: 7/25/2013 10:34:00 AM
Truth you have penned but all circumstances can change..Enjoyed reading your voice..Thanks for the visit..Sara
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Date: 7/25/2013 5:17:00 AM
- A very touching poem Ronny! - The world and life has its shadow sides, and you have described them well in your poem. - Thanks for the nice visit on my poem. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/25/2013 5:29:00 AM
Thanx Anne, and its a pleasure. you always have a great read for me awaiting on your page
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