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Created for Shaped Haiku 2 contest offered by JCB Brul.

s d u o w i s p s l of c seaward b b i g o b n colours CLANKING MASTS empty l o b s t e r p o t s

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Date: 7/18/2025 12:19:00 PM
Congratulations on this creative winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Date: 7/16/2025 9:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Beau Barberis
Date: 7/17/2025 12:29:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 7/16/2025 12:10:00 PM
I enjoyed seeing this one. Congrats in the contest.
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Beau Barberis
Date: 7/17/2025 12:30:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea.
Date: 7/10/2025 10:46:00 AM
Love this, especially the ending!
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Beau Barberis
Date: 7/11/2025 10:05:00 AM
I'm secretly happy when the lobster pots come up empty.

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