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Created for Shaped Haiku 2 contest offered by JCB Brul.

From the Quay

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	       seaward

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   o     b    n     colours

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Dietrich Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 11:49 AM
Gosh do you live by the sea? Your poems describe it so well.
Kendrick Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 12:19 PM
Congratulations on this creative winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
mysore Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 9:28 PM
Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Barberis Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 12:29 AM
Thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 12:10 PM
I enjoyed seeing this one. Congrats in the contest.
Barberis Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 12:30 AM
Thanks, Andrea.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 10, 2025 at 10:46 AM
Love this, especially the ending!
Barberis Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 10:05 AM
I'm secretly happy when the lobster pots come up empty.
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