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From the Past Blood

River carries floating things through the muddy flood Generation bears inheritance from the past blood

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Date: 8/5/2012 7:37:00 PM

nice wording ;}

Date: 8/3/2012 7:54:00 PM

I like this one, BL. comparing our "blood" to the river.

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/4/2012 7:53:00 AM

Many thanks for reviewing, loved always,bl

Date: 8/3/2012 3:28:00 PM

bl I like this, but if I might say a monoku is a single line of poetry....david

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/4/2012 7:52:00 AM

Sorry, i knew but i have done this mistake. Thanks for reminding me. Loved always,bl

Date: 8/3/2012 2:58:00 PM

One generation passes everything to the next. Good way to describe it poetically.

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/4/2012 7:51:00 AM

Many thanks for reviewing my write,loved always,bl