Bl Devnath Poet Verse

From the Past Blood

River carries floating things
                                         through the muddy flood
                                     Generation bears inheritance
                                             from the past blood

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Debbie Duncan August 5, 2012 at 7:37 PM nice wording ;}

Andrea Dietrich August 3, 2012 at 7:54 PM I like this one, BL. comparing our "blood" to the river. Bl Devnath August 4, 2012 at 7:53 AM Many thanks for reviewing, loved always,bl

David Williams August 3, 2012 at 3:28 PM bl I like this, but if I might say a monoku is a single line of poetry....david Bl Devnath August 4, 2012 at 7:52 AM Sorry, i knew but i have done this mistake. Thanks for reminding me. Loved always,bl

Robert Pettit August 3, 2012 at 2:58 PM One generation passes everything to the next. Good way to describe it poetically. Bl Devnath August 4, 2012 at 7:51 AM Many thanks for reviewing my write,loved always,bl