From the Moon To the Night

Oh where hast thou gone? 
Away from me or to hide the shame?
A cloak agape revealing twinkling fabrics of the angels
One by one you all faded to the world opposite
Followed closely by me
Where then Night is our destination
Will this endless phase repeat and repeat?
First on one side and then on the other
The two faces of this...
Blue, Green, and White colored marble floating in the universe?
Am I always meant to be seperated from the Sun? 
Can we ever meet in person?
Wher then O Night hast thou vanished to?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/2/2011 5:22:00 PM
It's Free Verse Juggle the line breaks a bit and it would present better. "A cloak agape revealing twinkling fabrics of the angels" excellent line! Light & love
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Date: 10/5/2010 4:43:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work this eve..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
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Date: 9/20/2010 2:40:00 PM
Nice scenario of night and day here. Fine personification! We live on this "marble" and must try to make the best of it. Keep it up! Peace and blessings Matthew Anish(MattCard)
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