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Transforming square peg for a round hole, a bird nest of an ark holds secrets within each crevice. Surface metamorphoses, in flight a snowy egret. 2-12-2022 A STRAND (1072) Poetry Contest Brian Strand

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/17/2022 2:45:00 PM

If this is for a contest it will take a top prize

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/18/2022 1:04:00 PM

Wow, thanks.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/8/2022 8:59:00 PM

This is lovely, Eve. No regrets, I'm sure... (Couldn't resist that one...) And now, hold onto the arms of a chair or something: I read the title this way on your site: 'From the Lavers.' So, I was ready for washbasins or Wimbledon champs (as in the former tennis great, Rod Laver of Australia). You can't make this stuff up! lol. :) gw

M. L. Kiser
Date: 2/18/2022 1:19:00 PM

Gershon, I think you need some new lenses. Thanks though.