From the First Moment

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~From the first moment~ (Rhyming Couplet) From the first moment I set my eyes on you my heart for you did glow My love for you ever since then just seems to continue steadly grow And when you looked at me that day I could only see Pure happiness for us forever, just together you and me I know our love can just take us anywhere, any place I always want to see everyday and everywhere your face I want you to know that forever and ever I just love you And that for you my love and devotion will never stray I am aware that life can be at times hard but God made it simpler When HE gave you to me and thats when all my pain was easier to bear And now you and will just belong here and beyond together I like to think that you and I for each other will always care I can't even stand the thought of my life without you now We were just meant to be together and let our love for each other glow. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 December,25,2014

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Katie-Jayne Boardman

Date: 12/27/2014 5:46:00 PM

Thank you for this beautiful poem Dorian. I can really relate!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/25/2014 2:46:00 PM

beautifully expressed, dorian.. you bring out the real flavor of romance!.. wishing you a blessed Christmas!.. huggs

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/26/2014 2:59:00 AM

Hi Nette! Thank you so much for your very kind visit and comments much appreciated and all. I want to wish you a very happy holiday season and very happy new year! May you have the best year in 2015! :) Love and hugs! xxxoxx D.

Tim Smith

Date: 12/25/2014 6:51:00 AM

Beautiful sentiment...Merry Christmas Dorian

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/26/2014 2:54:00 AM

Hi Tim! Thank you so my very dear friend Tim your visit and comments are much appreciated. You're so kind as always. I want to wish you a very happy holiday season and happy new year and your family! Have a great day! :) Love and hugs! xxoxxo D.

David Williams

Date: 12/25/2014 3:11:00 AM

Well done, I like it...

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/26/2014 2:51:00 AM

Thank you so much David my dear friend for your very kind visit and comments. Much appreciated as always. Wish you a very happy holiday season and happy new year! Have a very nice day! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.