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Written: September 24, 2023 _____________________________________________________________ In the dawn-like haze—a shriek was heard, An echo so shrewd, yet birdless, oddly slurred It was ordained by—a stratum unseen, A throbbing coerce, a numen so keen. A canticle flower—a bellow coarsely flung, Through bosky drifts, those shadows clung. The broken clavicle, brittle skull, Doused in lacquer—a tale to annul. Cried creative bone, from annals of time, In a secluded hut—where lamina chime. With guttural utterance—the gowk did sing, Fluted notes on brinks of obsidian string. Cloaked in the dimly lit mist, a canon of clamor, Shaping the world with a mystic glamour. In the glum of worship, a rite did splay, As voices uttered—in a solemn display. A corpse lay still, in the midst of the scene, Dazzled by the entombing, a nebulous flesh serene. Funerary hums—in syllabic verse, Resonated through time, as a solemn curse. In an urn—fugally adorned With fugal melodies, the ashes were borne, A symphony of sorrow, a requiem grand, For the soul departed, to a distant land. The misty air whispered—in mournful tones, As the funerary procession made its way, A solemn journey, through the mist, embrace. To the final resting place, where shadows trace. And so, the hum continued, a haunting refrain, As the earth embraced the remains. Silent and still—in eternal rest, In the hallowed ground, the corpse was blessed. Gone was the body, but the spirit remained, A specter in the mist, forever ingrained. A memory of life—a tale to be told, In the echoes of time, where stories unfold. In the depths of the mist, a legacy grew, Of a life once lived, and the love that it knew. The funerary hum—a reminder of grace, As it carried the spirit to a heavenly place.

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Date: 9/25/2023 4:59:00 AM
In the depths of the mist, a legacy grew, Of a life once lived, and the love that it knew---highly poetic my friend and powerful parting thoughts.
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Date: 9/25/2023 4:04:00 AM
Very expresssive one along the lines of a Halloween or scary theme. It has very good rhythm, rhyme and flow with excellent vocabulary. Way to go. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 9/24/2023 11:28:00 PM
What brilliant wordplay! I will forever be in awe of those rhymes and how you write so many poems in oneday is just beyond incredible! You can beat even AI, with your brilliant poetry and prolific nature of writing! Those rhymes are unmatched especially “ did splay and display” who would have thought of such a rhyme. Im amazed! Absolutely loved reading this exquisite write flowing in sheer eloquence! every line is worth quoting! So good and artistic! Loved this
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Date: 9/24/2023 7:27:00 PM
This one has deep dark death yet reveals the body is not the spirits final destination. I was engaged and enjoy the simple yet complex nature of this poem. Well done.
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