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From the Depth of My Heart

I sat and pondered for a while; My pen would not move even with guile; Soon the page overflowed in ink; My pen raced along and thought in pink; My gratitude for everybody in my life filled the heart; Everybody had played their part; The Creator, My parents , My family , My teachers and My friends , to everyone and everything in sight and yet unseen... Wistfully I thought "Where indeed have I been?" Present here every moment and yet absent; Every moment quite well spent.... Tired, after much writing, to see what I wrote; To my surprise not a scratch on my note; Truth struck me full in the face; When a stranger tells me "Wipe your tears, they have wiped out everything....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/3/2016 11:51:00 PM
Hi,, thank you for replying to my comment, hope to see you around
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Date: 1/30/2016 5:38:00 PM
GANAPATHIRAMAN, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. Always & Forever! LINDA
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Ganapathiraman Raman
Date: 2/1/2016 10:42:00 AM
Linda, Thank you Linda For your kind comments Fondly wish there were More poetry writing moments! Raghu
Date: 11/28/2015 10:39:00 PM
Granpathiraman,, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 1/16/2015 12:24:00 AM
thank you for the nice reply ((regarding the bottom reply))
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Date: 1/15/2015 4:28:00 PM
Captivated by this little poem. Particularly the last line; how true it is! Your writing style really grabs me too.
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Ganapathiraman Raman
Date: 1/16/2015 3:10:00 AM
Isaiah, Thanks for your comments. Ganapathiraman
Date: 1/13/2015 5:13:00 AM
- The new year is still "just a baby" .... I welcome you to P - Soup and wish you a beautiful and peaceful new year - Hope we can share many new poems this year - You write very well, Ganapathiraman - Have a great day - // Anne-Lise :)
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Ganapathiraman Raman
Date: 1/15/2015 5:17:00 AM
Anne, Thanks for your warm welcome - Ganapathiraman
Date: 1/10/2015 11:16:00 PM
Ganapathiraman, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Ganapathiraman Raman
Date: 1/10/2015 11:23:00 PM
Linda, Thanks for your welcome. I am a fledgling poet and welcome any kind of feedback. Happy New Year... Ganapathiraman

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