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From the Deepest Caves One Name Echoed

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unrhymed couplets 5 pairs each a double echo paired to make ten lines on the seventh step crowned

Smiling hotly you're the flame captured underneath burning with a sunrise golden gleam frosted Sparkling within dewdrops crystals crash over oceans waves rise and fall to grace At your feet adoring they kiss salt saluting promise kneeling upon the sand footprints hold ground held Those inside one thousand memories wrapped forever perfect jewel you are the pearl of a deep sea always crowned Lustre of one rainbow washed clean cut perfect flower white lily from the heart of love you brought peace

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Gary Bateman

Date: 12/10/2017 11:56:00 AM

Hello Liam Mate!! Methinks the "dewdrops" in your marvelously-conceived and written Couplet here might have traces of some stout "Irish Dew" mixed in with them!! Why not, eh?? LOL!! You'll have the Leprechauns laughing out loudly on that one!! With that, My Best Congratulations to you on the POTW honor with this exceptional Couplet write!! A FAVE!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Maria Williams

Date: 12/10/2017 2:20:00 AM

Congrats on POTW Liam - a well deserved honor for your symbolic description of love emanating from a lovely romance ...Maria

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/9/2017 3:59:00 PM

This impressive poem is so deserving of POTW Liam! Congratulations on having it honored with POTW! : )

Marilyn Williams

Date: 12/8/2017 9:17:00 AM

Your words genunine, your thoughts true. Congrats on your Poem of the week.

Marilyn Williams

Date: 12/4/2017 9:37:00 AM

Your poem is deeply moving. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing the POTW.

Donna Loughman

Date: 12/3/2017 3:16:00 PM

Liam, congratulations on P.O.T.W. A perfect jewel should always be crowned! Well done and well deserved! :-)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/3/2017 10:52:00 AM

Hi Liam!:)) Wow! A very huge congratulations on POTW! Very much deserved my dearest friend Liam. A very beautiful romantic love poem! Very golden glowing pen!Just awesome! I'm so very happy for you. Enjoy it!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Akkina Downing

Date: 12/3/2017 7:56:00 AM

This is so beautiful and romantic. Congrats on potw, dear Liam! Hugs and smiles :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/29/2017 12:21:00 AM

You do the romance and ancient tales so well, loved this write!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/28/2017 1:45:00 PM

Such a beautiful romantic gem of a poem Liam:-) hugs Jan xx

Donna Loughman

Date: 11/28/2017 11:15:00 AM

Liam, once again your pen sang excellent on this spiritual tribute to grace... loved how you worked in the ten stanzas for the “ perfect jewel” well done as always:-)

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/28/2017 11:06:00 AM

Lovely way to express the coming of Love...Peace...All the best Liam...

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/28/2017 10:10:00 AM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^