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unrhymed couplets 5 pairs each a double echo paired to make ten lines on the seventh step crowned 

Smiling hotly you're the flame captured underneath 
burning with a sunrise golden gleam frosted

Sparkling within dewdrops crystals crash 
over oceans waves rise and fall to grace

At your feet adoring they kiss salt saluting promise 
kneeling upon the sand footprints hold ground held 

Those inside one thousand memories wrapped forever 
perfect jewel you are the pearl of a deep sea always crowned

Lustre of one rainbow washed clean cut perfect flower 
white lily from the heart of love you brought peace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/10/2017 11:56:00 AM
Hello Liam Mate!! Methinks the "dewdrops" in your marvelously-conceived and written Couplet here might have traces of some stout "Irish Dew" mixed in with them!! Why not, eh?? LOL!! You'll have the Leprechauns laughing out loudly on that one!! With that, My Best Congratulations to you on the POTW honor with this exceptional Couplet write!! A FAVE!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 12/10/2017 2:20:00 AM
Congrats on POTW Liam - a well deserved honor for your symbolic description of love emanating from a lovely romance ...Maria
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Date: 12/9/2017 3:59:00 PM
This impressive poem is so deserving of POTW Liam! Congratulations on having it honored with POTW! : )
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Date: 12/8/2017 9:17:00 AM
Your words genunine, your thoughts true. Congrats on your Poem of the week.
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Date: 12/4/2017 9:37:00 AM
Your poem is deeply moving. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing the POTW.
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Date: 12/3/2017 3:16:00 PM
Liam, congratulations on P.O.T.W. A perfect jewel should always be crowned! Well done and well deserved! :-)
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Date: 12/3/2017 10:52:00 AM
Hi Liam!:)) Wow! A very huge congratulations on POTW! Very much deserved my dearest friend Liam. A very beautiful romantic love poem! Very golden glowing pen!Just awesome! I'm so very happy for you. Enjoy it!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 12/3/2017 7:56:00 AM
This is so beautiful and romantic. Congrats on potw, dear Liam! Hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 11/29/2017 12:21:00 AM
You do the romance and ancient tales so well, loved this write!
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Date: 11/28/2017 1:45:00 PM
Such a beautiful romantic gem of a poem Liam:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/28/2017 11:15:00 AM
Liam, once again your pen sang excellent on this spiritual tribute to grace... loved how you worked in the ten stanzas for the “ perfect jewel” well done as always:-)
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Date: 11/28/2017 11:06:00 AM
Lovely way to express the coming of Love...Peace...All the best Liam...
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Date: 11/28/2017 10:10:00 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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