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From the Benedict Arnold Trial

"One if by land, two if by sea". That's what Paul Revere said to me. But my memory's just no good, and sadly, I misunderstood. Anyway, Paul was just a spy, and I like eating shepherd's pie.

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Date: 7/22/2025 4:20:00 PM
fun and creative write :-) -- wasn't expecting the last line....you're a witty guy
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David Crandall
Date: 7/22/2025 8:59:00 PM
Thanks Sara :-)
Date: 7/22/2025 11:00:00 AM
Sounds like you were minding your own pie ;)
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David Crandall
Date: 7/22/2025 3:51:00 PM
lol - I just wanted food to be part of it.
Date: 7/22/2025 10:50:00 AM
What a creative/fun write. Love It... Thanks for the laugh. I needed it... Have a fun day writing away...............
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David Crandall
Date: 7/22/2025 10:52:00 AM
Thanks Paula! You can tell I flunked history.

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