From Roots To Thorns
Trying might make us good ,intentionally
For sake of blood lacking breath of visual
Composers all around
Reciting the benefits of loyalty
Crop up again with idol mind
Craving for golden sweets
With pre-owned diamonds
Isn't this antithesis
Well known roots
Lapse with faults
Idol mind is a key to success
Was an unframed judgement
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