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From Robert Frost 'The Road Not Taken';Last Line Verse

Galloping horses shudder the ground as .....Two Horsemen draw lashes, striking forth on .....Roads parallel. Dawn appears through trees and roads .....Diverge one to the east, the other south. Horseman one .....In earnest, upon a life depends, carries .....A somber secret, written on .....Yellow parchment ; on it drawn a nail through hand and .....Wood

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/3/2010 6:21:00 PM

Dear David, Sincere Congratulations on YOUR Well Deserved Win in Dane Ann's First Ever "End Line Word" Form Contest YOU give High Honors to this New Form With this Magnificent POETIC Artwork Thank-YOU for Your Support and Participation in Dane and My Endeavor to Establish this New Form of POETRY We Welcome YOUR input YOUR POETRY Friend ALWAYS...HG

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 3/2/2010 1:22:00 PM

Hey David, Congratulations on your win in the contest! I've asked Audrey to post this comment on my behalf. ...Jimmy

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/2/2010 11:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Dane Ann's contest David. Love, Carol

Noel Villarosa

Date: 3/2/2010 1:21:00 AM

Very creative write, David. My congratulations to you. (^_^) Noel.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/1/2010 10:20:00 PM

Congrats on your honorable win, David. Best wishes, Caroline.

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/1/2010 8:35:00 PM

Hey David, my congratulations on your win in the contest! And thank you for taking the time to read and leave comments on my work! Peace, Audrey

John Freeman

Date: 3/1/2010 5:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your Hm David. Agape, Moses

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/1/2010 5:02:00 PM

Congratulations David, for your success in my contest! EVERYONE that participated in the first ever End Line Word poetry form contest deserves drum rolls and kudos! Every entry was wonderful. Picking winners was nearly impossible…but had to be done. Thank you very much for supporting this contest. Poetry Soup poets are super!!! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Marty Owens

Date: 3/1/2010 4:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/1/2010 4:13:00 PM

Congrats David on your winning poem and placement in the first ever End Line Word contest.. a wonderful write and win for u to enjoy in the winners circle... luv.. Linda-Marie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/1/2010 2:54:00 PM

This is awesome, David! Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Matthew Anish

Date: 2/25/2010 9:24:00 AM

Very clever words. I wonder if there is a name for this type of poem? Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/21/2010 6:31:00 PM

Amazing end-line poem, David. And a great tribute to Frost's work! You give us a very powerful image. Love, Carolyn

Noel Villarosa

Date: 2/20/2010 1:39:00 AM

Well done and very clever to bring out for display this Last line verse. (^_^) Noel.

Laura Spears

Date: 2/19/2010 7:46:00 PM

I love Robert Frost. The rest of the poem reminds me of the Highwayman. Very creative. Happy Writing.

Rich Szczerzyszczynsky

Date: 2/13/2010 3:17:00 PM

That's brilliant !!! It would be great to see that dynamic story galloping on the paper. Designed by using specific fonts it can be poem as well as graphic piece of art. You are tallented David !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2010 7:26:00 AM

This is a very interesting one, dAvid. Love your imagination. I really need to sit down and try one of these end line poems sometime!! So glad you liked my sonnet. Luv, Andrea

Brian Strand

Date: 2/9/2010 11:58:00 PM

Godd twist here David on a famous line.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words and comments today

The Fringe

Date: 2/9/2010 7:37:00 PM

Veeery creative and fun to read. Good job. David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/9/2010 7:41:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your outstanding poetry with us today David. Love, Carol

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/9/2010 4:01:00 AM

Well now David, You have brought out the very best in this form. What a wonderful piece you have written here! Excellent job. Love it.This would be a contest winner. Into my favs. ...and thanks for your comment on my poem" little feet". -Robert

Marty Owens

Date: 2/8/2010 7:43:00 PM

Wow...David...This is cool man...Love this form don't you? Enjoyed Reading....Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/8/2010 6:51:00 PM

Wonderful write for the new End Line Word Poetry form.. HG and Dane Ann would be so proud for your stirring contribution... I like the piece u chose for your inspiration David.. and its true (at least in my case) in reply to your comment on my poem.. friends cannot be lovers and lovers cannot be friends any more.. .. my poem was the end result of both the friendship and the relationship... luv.. "Sweetheart" of P.S.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/8/2010 6:42:00 PM

Dear David, Very Well Done I applaude YOUR POETIC Talent Thank-YOU for supporting The First part of creating a New Form If YOU like YOU can read a few more "END Line Word" POETRY Karen O'Leary's POEM "Harmony" YOU have read Marty's Doris Culverhouse's POEM "Day Light" Linda-Marie Bariana's POEM "Stolen LOVE" she also has 3 more after this one And Ruben Ortellao's POEM " Those Rejected Shoulders " I will ask all of these Great POETS to read YOURS Do YOU have an ENCORE POEM ALWAYS YOURS..HG

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/8/2010 6:07:00 PM

This is brilliant writing David, and you have the form down perfectly! I really enjoyed this one. Blessings, Connie