From Puppy Crush To Real Love

And down our secret country lane Two souls as one playfulness gleamed, We laughed beneath the crisp of rain A puppy affair we careened-- To relish the hours in a shade In the gush of sleet's lullaby With abandon feet in a wade Reflecting young crush, hearts did sigh. Sweet adventures so unrehearsed Grew from fancy to deepened union; Our couple - dates with fervor's thirst Affirmed years of real communion. Now, our eyes hold love, murmurs touch Just like my past wedding bouquet Within all times this life I clutch As true love ripens every day . When trials come as joy's surprise... Both of us walk on godly air Oh how a moment never dies To celebrate all rains we share. 3/21/2017 For Eve Roper: Puppy love vs True love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/15/2017 9:06:00 AM
Back to congratulate you, Nette:)
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Date: 4/14/2017 4:29:00 PM
Its a heartfelt poem Nette and a joy to read.I read it twice already:)
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Date: 4/13/2017 10:38:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win. I want to thank you for entering my contest. Yes, true love ripens every day we all have our ups and downs, but can we work on them jointly . May you have Blessed weekend… ~*
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Date: 4/13/2017 10:15:00 PM
Congrats Nette, I really enjoyed this lovely poem!
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Date: 3/28/2017 1:38:00 AM
Hi Nette, beautiful, I think most romances start out as puppy love and developes from there, lovely romantic little poem my friend, hope you are well,...take care......Vera
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Date: 3/26/2017 8:02:00 AM
Lovely, dear Nette:)
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Date: 3/21/2017 2:13:00 PM
yes to be in love with love is far different than being in love, puppy love is light heart-ed true love is the hard work of give and take
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Date: 3/21/2017 8:43:00 AM
Both kinds of love are imbued with the colours of the rainbow. You have provided an apt description and brightened my morning in the process.hugs Rick.
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Date: 3/21/2017 12:57:00 AM
Beautifully done Nette. There is such soft, sweet emotion here. We never really forget our first love and here you speak of first love growing into something that will last forever. Great stuff. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB
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Date: 3/21/2017 12:34:00 AM
Love in the rain...so delightful :-) I love how you take us to the present and honour the love that has deepened with time. Beautifully written a joy to read :-) blessings, lynn
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Date: 3/20/2017 3:33:00 PM
- Happiness and beautiful written, Nette - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/20/2017 3:01:00 PM
That young love can turn into something special
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Date: 3/20/2017 12:28:00 PM
Such a beautifully descriptive love poem Nette. Nothing like sharing love in a gentle rain storm
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