Nette Onclaud Poet Quatrain

From Puppy Crush To Real Love

And down our secret country lane
Two souls as one   playfulness gleamed,
We laughed beneath the crisp of rain
A puppy affair   we careened--
To relish the hours in a shade 
In the gush of sleet's lullaby
With abandon   feet in a wade
Reflecting young crush, hearts did sigh.

Sweet adventures so unrehearsed
Grew from fancy to deepened union;
Our couple - dates  with fervor's thirst
Affirmed years of real communion.

Now, our eyes hold love,  murmurs touch
Just like my past wedding bouquet
Within all times   this life I clutch
As true love ripens every day .
When trials come as joy's surprise...
Both of us walk on godly air
Oh how a moment never dies
To celebrate all rains we share.


3/21/2017
For Eve Roper: Puppy love vs True love

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Joanna Daniel April 15, 2017 at 9:06 AM Back to congratulate you, Nette:)

Sara Chansarkar April 14, 2017 at 4:29 PM Its a heartfelt poem Nette and a joy to read.I read it twice already:)

Eve Roper April 13, 2017 at 10:38 PM Nette, congratulations on your win. I want to thank you for entering my contest. Yes, true love ripens every day we all have our ups and downs, but can we work on them jointly . May you have Blessed weekend… ~*

Arthur Vaso April 13, 2017 at 10:15 PM Congrats Nette, I really enjoyed this lovely poem!

Vera Duggan March 28, 2017 at 1:38 AM Hi Nette, beautiful, I think most romances start out as puppy love and developes from there, lovely romantic little poem my friend, hope you are well,...take care......Vera

Joanna Daniel March 26, 2017 at 8:02 AM Lovely, dear Nette:)

Frederic Parker March 21, 2017 at 2:13 PM yes to be in love with love is far different than being in love, puppy love is light heart-ed true love is the hard work of give and take

Richard Lamoureux March 21, 2017 at 8:43 AM Both kinds of love are imbued with the colours of the rainbow. You have provided an apt description and brightened my morning in the process.hugs Rick.

Judy Ball March 21, 2017 at 12:57 AM Beautifully done Nette. There is such soft, sweet emotion here. We never really forget our first love and here you speak of first love growing into something that will last forever. Great stuff. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB

Lynn Marie March 21, 2017 at 12:34 AM Love in the rain...so delightful :-) I love how you take us to the present and honour the love that has deepened with time. Beautifully written a joy to read :-) blessings, lynn

Anne-Lise Andresen March 20, 2017 at 3:33 PM - Happiness and beautiful written, Nette - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith March 20, 2017 at 3:01 PM That young love can turn into something special

Chris Green March 20, 2017 at 12:28 PM Such a beautifully descriptive love poem Nette. Nothing like sharing love in a gentle rain storm