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From Praying to Grieving

Praying

Pleading

Mourning

Grieving

With all of the praying, pleading done,
John died; I was mourning. Grieving won!


*I know his spirit will be reunited with mine.  Faith keeps us going
Entry for Dr. Ram’s Tyburn contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/26/2011 4:27:00 PM
Love this sad but beautiful write, my friend. Many congrats on your wins : )
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Date: 8/26/2011 10:53:00 AM
Congratulations, Carolyn. In heaven he'll wait for you.
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Date: 8/26/2011 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tyburn" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2011 11:26:00 PM
Carolyn- Congrats to you...Where do u find the time to write while evading Irene? I hope u are safe... A meaningful Tyburn...touching. Gwendolen
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Date: 8/25/2011 11:05:00 PM
The most personal one in the contest and one of the very best. COngrats, Carolyn.
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Date: 8/25/2011 9:13:00 PM
Smartly put together Carolyn. Really a good play in arrangment of your words. Cool also that you won with this classic. Agape, MOses
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Date: 8/25/2011 6:01:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in my contest,Carolyn
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Date: 8/22/2011 10:18:00 AM
Excellent my friend and thank you for your leading me to enter the contest in the first place, I see Dr. Ram beat me out again, tell him I have bruises, just kidding, How's your health my friend? I pray that the Lord will somehow aid you in your insurance plight an make things better for you, this poem was good as usual but you see when it comes to you I'm biased. God bless
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Date: 8/19/2011 12:51:00 PM
At those moments when you're missing him, my dear friend, know that he's right there with you...not far at all. God bless. Much love, Annalise
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Date: 8/18/2011 10:37:00 PM
Sad tale - my father died about 16 months ago - Death is still the greatest indignity. I have never seen this form before - a new one on me! Keep it up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/18/2011 12:26:00 AM
well, I'll say goodnight to you on your lovely Tyburn. SEe ya later.
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Date: 8/17/2011 2:20:00 PM
Soupp mail Carolyn..
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Date: 8/17/2011 2:12:00 PM
sad thoughts.....hope you day is good and you are feeling better!! heart felt poem.
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Date: 8/17/2011 1:16:00 PM
a very tender and so beautiful piece of poetry. thank you for commenting on Harrison's Five and Dime. yes My wife and i are moving to a house with higher rent, so we have to cut down on our expenses for awhile, but hope to be back someday soon.
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Date: 8/17/2011 12:48:00 PM
A beautiful, moving write Carolyn.. I love your footnote, faith really keeps us going ;) love W
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Date: 8/17/2011 11:49:00 AM
Keep that faith with you, Carolyn-- this is such a touching poem, I think everyone who's lost somebody they've loved can relate so well to this--wish you the best in Dr. Ram's contest, hugs
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Date: 8/17/2011 11:02:00 AM
Such a heart breaking poem, my friend, but, yes, I'm sure you will be reunited some day : )
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Date: 8/17/2011 9:28:00 AM
My heart cries for you Carolyn. Keep your faith. I wish you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/16/2011 11:44:00 PM
Sad one, Carolyn, and heartfelt.
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Date: 8/16/2011 11:34:00 PM
I love the poem! I hope you have been healing since your loss! I hope things are going well for you! My heart goes out to you! Good luck in the contest!!
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Date: 8/16/2011 9:49:00 PM
Dear Carolyn, is this your loss? What a sensitive loving verse for the one you love. Hope healing has eased the pain.
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Date: 8/16/2011 6:48:00 PM
Thanks for the entry, carolyn Soup Mail!!!!
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Date: 8/16/2011 6:15:00 PM
a mood that flows with nostalgia, carols.. john will be proud of this; in perfect form as well.. my shadorma contest is filling up well, thanks for joining... winning wishes in dr. ram's contest! :) huggs
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Date: 8/16/2011 6:13:00 PM
Such a touching write dear poet ! I've followed you through the time I've been here on the Soup, and know how you feel about John. May God's blessings be with you love, and may your dreams come true ! Have a blessed week my dear friend ! Much love, james
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Date: 8/16/2011 4:54:00 PM
Reads like a winner..I feel your pain..Good luck in the contest...Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Daddy always told that story of what happened to him and his brother that was two years older than him..Daddy did not say anything about anyone getting hurt or that anyone died..He said they were running looking back and they both hit a brick wall..Knocked them both out..Sara
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