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From Path To Bird In Flight

bird in flight how many miles seen many a sight a flight full of smiles ––––––––––––––– / high above cloud // calling to its' friends ..//// calling so very loud //////////// much encouragement it sends ////////////////////// then it drops back–––––––––––––––––––––––///// <:checking all is well–––––––––––––––––––––––––< flight still on track–––––––––––––––––––––––\\\\\ many a good tale to tell as well \\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\ of memories it tweets \\\\\\\\\\ of every feather it \\\\ preens and treats \\ ––––––––––––––– \ like flights must end with land in sight they don't pretend whistle delight and land

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Date: 5/6/2018 7:34:00 AM
Wheeee! Wonderful piece Mick! My bird lovin heart swelling with delight! A fave :) A lovely day to you! xomo!
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/6/2018 11:37:00 AM
Been a gorgeous day thanks for that. Thanks for your kind words and you faving it too, honoured and humbled I am. Mick
Date: 5/6/2018 2:43:00 AM
Lovely concrete Mick, oh to be able to fly. Tom
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/6/2018 11:32:00 AM
Cheers Tom! Yeah, if only eh!
Date: 5/5/2018 7:39:00 PM
Very creative...I like the imagery and message too...All the best Mick
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/6/2018 11:26:00 AM
Thanking you most kindly kind sir. Hope your keeping well Arturo. Mick

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