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From Path To Bird In Flight

bird  in  flight
                        how many miles
                    seen many a sight
                 a flight full of smiles
                 –––––––––––––––                                                /
                  high  above  cloud                                              //
                   calling to its' friends                                     ..////
                      calling so very  loud                         ////////////    
              much encouragement it sends //////////////////////
           then it drops back–––––––––––––––––––––––/////
     <:checking all is well–––––––––––––––––––––––––<
           flight still on track–––––––––––––––––––––––\\\\\
             many a good tale to tell as well \\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\
                    of memories it tweets                        \\\\\\\\\\
                   of  every  feather it                                      \\\\
                  preens and  treats                                             \\
                 –––––––––––––––                                                \
                like flights must end
                 with  land  in  sight
                  they don't pretend
                      whistle delight
                          and  land

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/6/2018 7:34:00 AM
Wheeee! Wonderful piece Mick! My bird lovin heart swelling with delight! A fave :) A lovely day to you! xomo!
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/6/2018 11:37:00 AM
Been a gorgeous day thanks for that. Thanks for your kind words and you faving it too, honoured and humbled I am. Mick
Date: 5/6/2018 2:43:00 AM
Lovely concrete Mick, oh to be able to fly. Tom
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/6/2018 11:32:00 AM
Cheers Tom! Yeah, if only eh!
Date: 5/5/2018 7:39:00 PM
Very creative...I like the imagery and message too...All the best Mick
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/6/2018 11:26:00 AM
Thanking you most kindly kind sir. Hope your keeping well Arturo. Mick

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