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From My Window

The light from my window shines.. Brings my eyes and dreams all outside.. Birds flying so high from tree to tree.. My only prayers are to write that free.. The light from my window drifts past.. My mind follows the wind from line one to last.. The tree tops dance to the music of me.. Each word a whisper that screams what I see.. The light from my window is my inspiration.. A place to imagine and play is my dedication.. The page is full and a title is found.. All my visions and images expressed with no sound..

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T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 6/28/2011 2:38:00 PM

Fantastic read Micheal congrats on you no. 10th.place win.Thanks so much for all your kind and very sweet congrats and comments you send.I really had a nice anniversary and hunnie had a wonderful B-day yesterday Kids gave their dad a nice party and we saw a movie and had ice-cream cones had a great time.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/28/2011 3:07:00 AM

What a great source of inspiration you find in that light, Michael! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/27/2011 7:49:00 PM

so cool that this one got on the list. It deserves to be there. A great poem, and congrats, Michael.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/27/2011 4:53:00 PM

Congrats..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/27/2011 12:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Miranda's "Inspired" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 6/27/2011 11:13:00 AM

Congratulations Michael on your win with this wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Dinda Minardi

Date: 6/27/2011 9:33:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Michael!!! :)

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 6/27/2011 7:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! Such a great flow...and images. Love it :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/27/2011 6:10:00 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of Miranda, Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/26/2011 8:28:00 PM

bravo and kudos as well as congrats Michael on your impressive win with this expressive entry so creative my White Knight ... enjoy top ten victory with luv.. as your Jersey Girl in cheering mode for u luv.. yeah..and me too..oh..

Cory Long

Date: 6/26/2011 8:18:00 PM

congrats on this exceptional write my friend. cory

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/22/2011 4:43:00 AM

This is quite a lovely write on what inspires you Michael. I am wishing you all the best for the contest with this beauty.. Week is quite hectic, having a board meeting on Friday, keep your fingers cross that it goes well. lol.. How is your week going? love ya Wilma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/22/2011 4:40:00 AM

A good view can be a great inspiration for sure..Enjoyed reading your creative work.Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/21/2011 11:08:00 PM

ok, I guessed wrong before. THIS would be your inspiration poem and it is very similar to the other one but it needed to be in an L form. I think this one fits the bill, Michael. A romantic setting you chose for your inspiration.

Date: 6/21/2011 6:41:00 PM

Beautifully written poem, Michael well done my friend. Love Alexa

Constance La France

Date: 6/21/2011 4:20:00 PM

Beautiful Michael, I love it, I have this attraction to windows also, one time I had an apartment with none, a real dark place, so I got prints of all kinds of windows, it looked amazing, windows everywhere. I wish you the best in this contest with this lovely poem~~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/21/2011 3:19:00 PM

that window u peer from is most inspiring Michael as u continue to share words so emphatic and intense my W.K.of P.S... good luck in the contest .. joining u in looking out into the vast view of creativity luv.. your Jersey Girl in inspired mode from u luv..forever and always..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/21/2011 1:00:00 PM

utterly fascinating, michael.. your words paint such lovely images! :) huggs, nette

Dinda Minardi

Date: 6/21/2011 6:41:00 AM

Wowww... My fave is the third stanza... Well written, Michael..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/20/2011 3:03:00 PM

I started writing a year ago this past Feb. after having shoulder surgery and being home bound for awhile... But today it is still my place to write " From My Window" great contest idea....Michael