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From My Hammock

I turn off the spicket of daily business From inside the cocoon Of my hammock My world seems different As I gently sway, caressed in suspension No effort needed To watch the graceful lineal limbs Of a cedar tree Rising like a chipmunks’ ladder With swags of green falling I lay back to listen. Nature has her own Noisy silence More peaceful than the abyss Of my past haunts I welcome the release of tensions No judgement Inside the womb of safe lands I feel time spiral backwards The lullful rhythm swaying me to rest Indulging this moment Eyes close to the untold wonder of dreams Sounds shuffle beyond hearing I drift to the creative zone A mile of snoring when she arrives Then disappearing To suddenly awake with new vision seeing words on a page I jump up to grab pen and new paper Now the sight fading away fast I must write
I dedicate this poem to all those who, in this busy, crazy world, can see a vision to share with the world that helps the world be a better place through their craft, be it writing, painting or performance....listening to your muse when she speaks is the first step of all amazing artists. 7-12-2019 'Your Best Poem That is Trophy Worthy (Premiere Contest Trophy) Contest 4'

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Date: 7/15/2019 3:03:00 PM
Ah, this is so poetically accurate; it is when we are in our most peaceful place that poems arrive in bulk, shooting themselves into our relaxed, hammock-laying mind. Nice one!
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/15/2019 3:21:00 PM
I don't get enough hammock time...but sitting my the sea I do regularly and it works just as good for me. Thanks for your kind words Caren!
Date: 7/14/2019 3:26:00 PM
my muse often sings loudest when i am at rest and i have learned if i do not give in to her the words will be lost in her spitefulness ...i like the scene you set up here :)
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/14/2019 11:27:00 PM
Yes, I do wish I could hold on to the dreams for longer then 2-3 sentences!
Date: 7/14/2019 2:11:00 PM
what a dreamy poem, and at the end of it, Quick, write the vision before it goes away. I hate waking up and my dreams are in my mind yet I cannot recall the details. GREAT writing.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/14/2019 11:30:00 PM
Thanks Andrea. All I could remember was a beautiful woman in whose lips I could see the ocean...wrote it out and sent it to a magazine.
Date: 7/14/2019 4:55:00 AM
I know the feeling, but so many times, I am too lazy to write.. well expressed..
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/14/2019 11:28:00 PM
Thanks! Usually I can't remember anything but a feeling.

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