From Lily's Womb

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Sentinels were gathered upon the pond dressed in their best green beau monde' Waiting to herald the birth of first bloom as twins were whelped from Lily's womb

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/30/2018 7:17:00 PM

You are in the zone!

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/28/2018 10:31:00 AM

I like this one, too, Lin. Here, we have orange day lilies growing wild in the fields. I'll bet you have them too.

Lin Lane
Date: 5/28/2018 11:37:00 AM

Yes we do, as well as wild iris and cattails. Thank you.

Roy Pett

Date: 5/28/2018 10:30:00 AM

Lin what beautiful imagery you have created with your words complimented by the lovely picture, a joy to read. :))

Lin Lane
Date: 5/28/2018 11:37:00 AM

Thank you very kindly for your remarks, Roy. I appreciate each one.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/28/2018 7:49:00 AM

Gorgeous. <3

Lin Lane
Date: 5/28/2018 8:41:00 AM

Thanks, Mo.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/28/2018 6:18:00 AM

absolutely stunning - love the idea of the plant giving birth to twins - what a gorgeous photo too:-) hugs jan x

Jan Allison
Date: 5/28/2018 12:51:00 PM

I've only ever seen the pink ones, those flowers look tulip like and I am sure they are gorgeous when they open:-) hugs jan x

Lin Lane
Date: 5/28/2018 6:23:00 AM

Thanks a bunch, Jan. I used to have a pond with beautiful lilies like these.