From John To Carolyn

you have been so very kind
so i write you this saying your on my mind
ours has been a special kind of bind
hearing from you helped me unwind

when i need prayer i drop you a line
or a word of encouragment you say it's fine
these three short years i've called you mine
and i still have yet to wine and dine

for this to end would be a crime
so don't let me have to drop a dime
lets keep this thing for all time
i'm just about to run out of rhyme
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
January 5, 2012 at 5:58 AM
Congrats on your win in the "Gift Exchange" contest John iii. Love, Carol
Babcock Avatar
January 2, 2012 at 4:15 PM
Wonderful poem for a wonderful lady. Congrats on your win. I am catching up but barely--i feel like a sinking ship and need a life raft to float. ha ha love phyl
Poet Avatar
January 2, 2012 at 9:15 AM
Liked it first time around.Congratulations on your win.
Lane Avatar
January 2, 2012 at 8:13 AM
Congratulations on your impressive win.
Williams Avatar
January 2, 2012 at 2:25 AM
John congrats on your win, Happy New Year..David
Devnath  Avatar
January 1, 2012 at 10:38 PM
Congratulation on your win in the Year 2012. Enjoyed. bl
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 1, 2012 at 8:23 PM
Congratulations John x
A   Avatar
January 1, 2012 at 7:40 PM
JOHN, happy new year.. and CONGRATULATIONS ;-) on my gift exchange contest. Thank you for being part of the joy of giving another poet a poem from the bottom of your heart,, the best wishes to you and your family this 2012 year,..always p.d.
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December 29, 2011 at 2:09 PM
Cute ending, John....I know that Carolyn will enjoy this one..I wish you winners' circle with this one..Thanks for stopping by, reading and taking the time to comment on my work..Was thinking of you the other day when I turned the wind up key on one of my music box players..Sara
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December 27, 2011 at 10:30 PM
What a beauty in words for a very beautiful and wonderful Poet Carolyn. Great write my friend with so much of music and melody with a floating heart. It would be a great entry for PD's contest. My good wishes for your entry and thank you for liking 'A Song for You'. Hope you would like the Song (my experimental Video) on U Tube. With best wishes for a Happy New Year...Ravindra....John Loving iii
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December 27, 2011 at 12:08 AM
A great tribute to a wonderful poet and lady.Enjoyed very much.Thanks for your comment at my poem 'To Phyllis Babcock' from Kashinath'.I appreciate the fact that you took time to read my poem and leave a comment there.'
A   Avatar
December 26, 2011 at 7:55 AM
I would love to see you enter this one or another one in my contest... your a hearty person.. Thought of you...and was gonna ask you to join my contest... I'll come back later in today...p.d
Loving Iii Avatar
December 26, 2011 at 10:31 AM
your wish is my command.
Neels Avatar
December 26, 2011 at 7:30 AM
Really enjoyed your rhyme John.. Awesome testimony of the gift friendship can really be ;)
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